Talk:Joe Sernio

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[edit] Issues for improvement

These things need improvement in the article. I'm going to try and fix some but, it would be good if the main contributors to the article could also see their way to helping.

• 1) Spelling and tone throughout
• 2) the references section needs cleaning
• 3) formatting (needs to be arranged similar to other more established entertainers - with biography at the top (early life, etc), followed by career information.
• 4) timeline should be removed and incorporated into the body of the article including inline citations/references

Jasynnash2 (talk) 14:32, 4 June 2008 (UTC)