Talk:Joaquín Amaro

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[edit] NPOV

This article has some POV problems. Many sections, especially the last alinea in the paragraph about the Villa assassination are full of unnecessary praise. Furthermore the delahuertist rebellion is presented here as if it were a threat to fair and peaceful elections. I won't deny that it was a threat to peace, but the whole reason the rebellion erupted in the first place was because the 1924 election was going to be rigged anyway, and De la Huerta wanted to forestall that. Also nothing is said about his pro-Hitler stance in the 1930's. Mixcoatl (talk) 13:14, 10 February 2008 (UTC)