Talk:Jenn Hanna

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[edit] Addressing cleanup issues

I did a bit of cleanup, trimming some of the gushing and wikifying the layout. I think the main issues outstanding are:

1. Further tightening of the prose; (Done, see below)
2. More non-curling biographical information - education etc, for a bio section;
3. Lead expanded per MoS - it might need a summary of the main points of the article to be compliant; Partially done.
4. REFERENCES Mostly done - see below;
5. It would be nice to either create stubs for some of the redlinks, or perhaps de-link some of them, if they are not notable enough to warrant WP articles.

FYI, just for comparison, THIS is what the article looked like before I started cleaning **pats self on back**, but there's definitely more to do. Anchoress 09:41, 11 August 2007 (UTC)

Huge improvement due largely to Canadian Paul's great work. Very little left to do. Anchoress 01:46, 20 August 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Mid-Clean Up Commentary

I did what I could with the prose, including creating a new section for her personal life, but it still looks a little bit like proseline - it needs some additional details to fill out some of the topics of discussion, especially in personal life and the most recent seasons. On to referencing. Cheers, CP 00:14, 20 August 2007 (UTC)

All but four statements have been referenced. I cannot find sources for them and, while I suspect that they are true, they still need to be referenced. I'm not an expert searcher though, but perhaps someone else is. Someone with better knowledge of curling should deal with the red links, though none of them particularly struck me as being unnecessary.

I need a break from this article, but hopefully it's been at least a bit more cleaned up.Cheers, CP 01:38, 20 August 2007 (UTC)

Wow, that was fantastic work CP, and so quick!! I can't believe you got all those refs and put them in so quickly. I also feel I learned a lot from seeing your sweeps. This is just great, the article is so much better~!! I'll have a look for the final refs, although a quick search doesn't seem promising. Anchoress 01:45, 20 August 2007 (UTC)