Talk:Jean Charles de Menezes/to do
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- Add details from the inquest when they come out.
- Continue to use {{note}} and {{ref}} to document sources.
- Continue to reword for clarity and brevity.
- Please attribute and cite sources accurately with regards to the IPCC leaked documents.
- If you have not recently, please review NPOV tutorial.
- Although this is a current event, please bear in mind that it is an encyclopedic article, and should be written from an historical perspective, as if it would be read the same 1 year or 100 years from now. The prevailing tense of sentences should be past-tense. Also avoid phrases such as "The latest reports indicate..."
- Use British English for this British/Brazilian topic.
- This article ought to be slimmed down! Suggestions:
- Use footnotes to explain items rather than explaining them inline
- Propose a series of smaller articles on the incident and aftermath
- Just edit down, remove every unnecessary word
- The notes needs to be numbered correctly - it's a mess
- clean up description of the incident itself, it is not easy to follow and makes little sense as is