Talk:Jason Baldwin

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I edited this into a more Wikipedic tone, removing the first person. There are still unreferenced allegations and, although it may have been obvious to the person who wrote this just who is referred to in the last paragraph by first name only, it's not obvious to the uninitiated reader. I suggest also that a reference to a lawyer's disbarment is sufficiently potentially contentious that it should be referenced or removed. Accounting4Taste 23:35, 1 May 2007 (UTC)