Talk:Janko Bobetko

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A nice start, with a picture and infobox. But it is quite short overall, and is not written in the most formal of ways. For example, Tito's name and title should be given in whole, and the phrase "5 decades of military service - although intermittently" should probably read something closer to "five decades of intermittent military service", or even simply "his career of military service spanned five decades." Copy-edit, expand a bit, and we can move this up to B-class. LordAmeth 14:57, 19 October 2006 (UTC)