Talk:Jan Willem Spruyt/GA1

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[edit] GA Review

  • A nonfree image could be rationalised, if you have one.
    • Unfortunately as yet no image has been found for Spruyt.
  • Break the first paragraph into more than one sentence please...
    • Done.
  • "Most of his life he practised as law agent in private practice in both Boer republics, however." - this reads awkwardly, especially at the end of a paragraph... can you reword it?
    • Done.
  • The link to Oosterwolde is a dab page.
    • Changed.
  • "Later Spruyt did act as State President" - "acted" might sound better than "did act"
    • Changed.
  • Some of these subsections are really short, not sure if they're really necessary...
    • Changed.
  • "He he was allowed" - typo?
    • Corrected.