Talk:James Fitzjames Stephen

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I attempted to approximately demarcate the appropriate sections for the article, and added information about his personal life (I used the 'citation needed' template because I wasn't sure the references I found were the best ones, they can be found here and here). Far be it for me to criticize the Encyclopedia Britannica, but the article suffers from clunky, obscure, obtuse, and sometimes even POV wording that should be made more concise. Eliz81 16:59, 19 July 2007 (UTC)