Talk:Jake Horsley

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I came across the Sebastian Horlsey entry and since I have read some of his brother Jake's books, decided to add the entry. How would you like me to improve its NPOV?

Hi, thanks for stopping by and contributing. When I added the NPOV tag, some of my reasons were:

phrases like "Horsley's incisive and provocative film analyses have appeared in various publications, including" unless there is an reputable outside source that you are quoting (and citing) for that statement, its not a neutral point of view.

The line "It was well reviewed by Salon and New Yorker critic Pauline Kael, who called Horsley "a marvelous critic" would need a citation since there obviously exists a source in Salon or NYT.

Other than that, it looks like a decent beginning article. Mbisanz (talk) 23:04, 8 December 2007 (UTC)

is the neutrality still under dispute??? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Plasmate (talk • contribs) 15:28, 23 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] is the neutrality still under dispute?

david Plasmate (talk) 15:30, 23 February 2008 (UTC)