Talk:Jain Irrigation Systems

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Articles for deletion This article was nominated for deletion on January 13, 2007. The result of the discussion was keep.

This page is intended to give info about an organisation working for agriculture & farmers, not an ad. material, If you wish, you can contribute or suggest changes. You can see page microsoft for contribute. Need more contribution for references and news etc. Thanks.

  • I do suggest you remove sentences like "making us the largest single producer of PVC Pipes in the country" and "We have set ourselves a goal `to become a major and reliable global supplier of food ingredients of finest quality.’" because it sounds like marketing/advertising talk. Articles on Wikipedia needs to be neutral. I will add a tag for neutrality, please leave it on the page until you have made the necessary changes to the page. - TexMurphy 13:52, 10 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Cleanup

I cleaned up the article some today to try and give it a fair shot at survival. To summarize the changes, the intro was rewritten (and shortened a bit), the products area was removed (it read too much like an advert and added little of encyclopedic value), and a few external links were removed. I didn't touch the history section much, since it would it would be a larger investment in time in an article that may end up deleted anyway — but at least it's tagged as a section which needs work in the future.

Since I know very little about this company (and am writing from a foreign POV), I'm hoping that I didn't make any misleading or otherwise erroneous changes here. If the article passes AfD, it'd be helpful to have someone with more familiarity look over things and take a shot at cleaning up the rest of it. Tijuana Brass 10:08, 15 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] tag for neutrality

when will the tag for neutrality be removed ? 210.212.185.33 11:08, 22 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Removed neutrality

Since the result of the discussion was keep. Clean up with POV. Yogita t