Talk:Jaflong

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[edit] Why this article likely to be advertise?

Jaflong is a natural tourist spot.I wrote this article from a neutral point of view.Someone must review this article and find any error or advertising element.Hopefully there is none. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Classicbanna (talk • contribs) 17:50, 18 August 2007

The text contains lots of subjective praise about how beautiful or otherwise nice various things are:

  • Khasia Rajbari (king’s palace) is simple yet comely.
  • The Piyain is synonymous of queen because of her beauty.
  • There is a beautiful tea garden in Jaflong.
  • Thease gardens increase beauty of Jaflong.
  • Dauki looks exactly like a picture and it is so pleasant for eyes.

Basically, the entire article reads like a sightseeing brochure for tourists, rather than something you'd expect to find in an encyclopedia. Please try to stick to the facts, or the whole article is likely to get deleted as an ad. Hqb 18:33, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

Thank you sir.I'm going to rewrite this article again shortly. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Classicbanna (talk • contribs) 00:02:22, August 19, 2007 (UTC).

I hope this article is better now.If any change needed please specify.thanks. Classicbanna 19:51, 20 August 2007 (UTC)

Some of the text in the stone crushing section is a direct copy from the source. You would have to re-write that so it does not violate copyright. I will have to remove the contents for now but feel free to rewrite and add back in. → AA (talk) — 21:34, 20 August 2007 (UTC)