Talk:Jack Paar

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The edits by User:Danny were, for the most part, not sound; I replaced the parts of the article that he moved around and revised it more generally to give the article's text a better flow from the version previous to Danny's edits, although I did leave in what Danny added about Paar's triple heart bypass surgery. I deleted the section header "Return after leaving show" and moved the content from that section into a more appropriate place at the end of "Highly emotional."

In addition, I wikilinked a few terms, added and corrected some crucial dates, and added the external link to the Museum of Broadcast Communications site about Paar.

It's my hope that these edits will find favor with the community; please leave any comments about the edits here, and I will gladly respond to them. Telestylo 07:11, 12 November 2005 (UTC)