Talk:Iraj Weeraratne
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[edit] NPOV
This article reads like a press release and has major NPOV problems. For example " ...Sri Lanka’s maestro", "Going where no local star has gone before", "Iraj has amazed Sri Lanka’s music moguls", "his unprecedented climb", "amazing track record", "phenomenal growth", "Iraj’s iconic influence", "What amazes Sri Lanka’s entertainment analysts most" all need to be scrubbed and rewritten in an encyclopedic tone. That's just from the first paragraph... --Aim Here 16:22, 25 February 2006 (UTC)
- I've had a go at rewriting the article, unfortunately not much salvageable from the press release, and had to cut it down to stub length unfortunately. --Canley 12:33, 9 March 2006 (UTC)
- this article is good. but try to include about his education and personal interests(about him) rather than marketing stuffs(odel)ruvinda
- it would be good to add information about his music, like discography and set the page up (layout wise) like any other musician/producer Thechowman 04:37, 25 February 2007 (UTC)