Talk:Iowa Army National Guard

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[edit] Style

Please go and have a look at WP:MOS. The lead section is toooooo long. There should only be one or two short paragraphs before the first section heading.

Also, unless I am mistaken - a lot of what is in the lead section really belongs at National Guard, not on a sub-unit article. Garrie 05:10, 29 November 2006 (UTC)