Talk:Inversions

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[edit] Things this article needs

• Details about edition(s) such as date, publisher, ISBN
• References such as a link to a review

Elonka 15:36, 5 February 2006 (UTC)

Date is already there. Other details will follow. Guinnog 15:55, 5 February 2006 (UTC)

Okay. You may wish to check other book articles on Wikipedia (Stranger in a Strange Land, Starship Troopers, Flight of Eagles) to get an idea of possible format, as well as checking Wikipedia:WikiProject_Books or Template_talk:Infobox_Book for ideas.  :) Elonka 16:27, 5 February 2006 (UTC)

[edit] New section

The new section on whether or not this is a Culture novel is a bit long I think. It's practically dominating the article for what is, essentially, a fairly minor point (that's not in dispute). The text that was there before connecting the novel to the Culture universe was plenty. My POV of course, but I think the new text is unnecessary article bloat. Care to discuss? --Plumbago 15:47, 11 July 2006 (UTC)

I agree. I slimmed it down somewhat. --Guinnog 16:23, 11 July 2006 (UTC)

Cool. But it's still like ~4 times as long as it needs to be. Although its author clearly took some time over it (and it's well-written), my gut feeling was to slim it down to, well, nothing. What was there already summed it up nicely (although I suppose a few points in the new text might be worth retaining). Cheers, --Plumbago 16:52, 11 July 2006 (UTC)

LOL, yes I was tempted to do the same. But, as you say, it's quite good stuff. Maybe we can integrate the old and the new a bit more? --Guinnog 16:56, 11 July 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for the kind remarks. Reading the phrase "Some have debated whether Inversions was a Culture novel", I thought maybe there was some dispute regarding this point, and probably went a little overboard trying to defend a view that doesn't need defending. My general feeling is that if a section on the question "Is Inversions a Culture novel?" is required at all, it may as well be reasonably comprehensive, however. Mujokan 05:55, 12 July 2006 (UTC)

Hi Mujokan. You've won me over somewhat. The changes made have improved and shortened the section. Needless to say, I've been unable to resist tweaking it myself. Anyway, I think I'm alright with it now. It was just a shock all that text appearing at once! Cheers, --Plumbago 11:43, 12 July 2006 (UTC)

Hi Plumbago. If you guys do decide to cut it down in the future, in my opinion the most "Culture-specific" references are the harback edition preface that capitalizes the word "Culture", the reference to "special circumstances", and DeWar's evident reluctance to use the word "culture". Also, I guess the stories DeWar tells are so close to Banks' other depictions of the "post-scarcity" economy of the Culture that any other interpretation would be somewhat strained. My two cents! Mujokan 07:38, 13 July 2006 (UTC)

I thought about adding a sentence mentioning that the torturers were killed in a manner strongly reminiscent of the knife-missile attack described in Use of Weapons, as that was what alerted me to the possibility of this being a Culture novel in disguise. I wasn't sure if it would just get deleted though. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 80.41.36.71 (talk • contribs) 22:13, 9 April 2007

Having just read this novel without reading any other Culture novels beforehand, I found this article helpful as it stands, setting the novel in the larger context of the series. - Fayenatic (talk) 19:20, 3 December 2007 (UTC)

I'm inclined to think that as it currently stands, this section of the article is essentially original research. It should be trimmed drastically to conform with WP:RS. --John (talk) 04:21, 11 April 2008 (UTC) (NB that I am also Guinnog from the posts above; I changed my user name)

I've done the deed. It saddened me as I pretty much agree with what I removed. Nevertheless, unless there was a valid source for it, we can't really have it. --John (talk) 03:13, 9 May 2008 (UTC)