Talk:Internet as a source of prior art

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[edit] Introduction paragraph

The introduction paragraph does not read as though this article is from an encyclopedia, and should be reworded. It should begin with the title of the article. --lifebaka (Talk - Contribs) 16:21, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

I have modified the introduction paragraph. Thanks. --Edcolins 17:25, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] There's too much jargon here for a general readership

Just my opinion.--h i s ^{s p a c e} _{r e s e a r c h} 21:58, 5 November 2007 (UTC)

Please could you be more specific.. What is unclear? I am ready to help and insert more explanation, but I would need more information. Thanks. --Edcolins 20:24, 8 November 2007 (UTC)

I have expanded the background section and removed the "confusion" tag for now. --Edcolins 21:28, 8 November 2007 (UTC)

It just doesn't read that smoothly for me, although maybe it was just my state of mind at the time that made me tag it like that.--h i s ^{s p a c e} _{r e s e a r c h} 00:39, 9 November 2007 (UTC)