Talk:IntelliStar

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The grammar on this article was HORRIBLE - --Bdj95 14:52, 10 July 2006 (UTC)

I agree, especially in the Intellistar's History section, which I have added a cleanup-copyedit tag to. I've tried to clean up that section in the past, but the same anonymous user(s) always keeps adding info to it, usually very poorly-worded. No offense to said anonymous user(s), but it's almost as if English is the writer's second language, the writing is quite broken... misternuvistor 08:40, 12 July 2006 (UTC)