Talk:Inslaw
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[edit] Horribly written
The second sentence of the first paragraph is a sentence fragment!Persse O'Reilly (talk) 21:17, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
- I just did some serious editing for the sake of grammar and continuity. The content has remained basically the same. I think this and related articles need more attention.
[edit] Dubious source
Is there even a magazine called "TC - Technical Consultant"? I can't seem to find anything on it except for this one article in this one nov-dec 1991 issue mentioned here, and even that seems only to be on conspiracy theory websites.
[edit] Awkward (incorrect?) phrasing
What does it mean when it says that in 1995 the Senate ordered a court to do something? Congress and the Judiciary are two separate branches of government. I don't believe the Senate can order a court to do anything (although the House and Senate together can change the jurisdiction of courts). I think the author has misunderstood or misstated what happened. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 209.148.120.84 (talk) 15:43, 26 January 2007 (UTC).
[edit] William Hamilton
Anyone have a wiki page for this William Hamilton. Was he mentioned as the founder before my edit? I noticed Hamilton was referenced under PROMIS contract and allegations of theft but did not see reference to him elsewhere in article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.18.82.93 (talk) 22:34, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
