Talk:Indigo Vertigo

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This article needs a fair bit of work. I've taken out the caps (which were distracting) and added the opening line explaining what Indigo Vertigo actually is -- it didn't say before -- but it still doesn't really conform to Wiki content standards. There are NPOV concerns, for example - "beautifully textured" art? it reads like an ad -- and the explanation could be clearer. But I'll leave it for someone who knows more about this kind of thing. Macavity7 13:15, 23 February 2006 (UTC)

I've done more work especially removing the excessive bold and some adspeak. It still has a lot about the process or how well people think of it and nothing about what it is about. I'd also query the use of graphic novella - surely that is a prestige format comic? (Emperor 20:35, 27 June 2007 (UTC))