Talk:Indian Lake (New Jersey)

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[edit] NPOV

I removed a few adjectives that I thought were un-encyclopediac.

[edit] Grammar Errors and pointless sentences

This article needs a total revamp. I removed poorly written sentences, and paragraphs that delve into unrelated facts, such as a local sport that children play on the local basketball court. No need to mention the rules of the sport, just the name. If you want the sport listed again, please place an internal link that directs to the actual rules of that sport.

I cleaned up the article significantly the last few days and linked a lot of the words with corresponding articles. -KD5463