Talk:Ilaiyaraaja
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
[edit] The Oven
- Please write/experiment here with sentences or paragraphs that you may like to add to the article
[edit] The Talk Box (for comments)
Apparently, Ilaiyaraaja featured in the front cover of the Tamil edition of India Today (see here). This 3rd August 2005 issue contains an interview with the composer. Has anyone read it? I presume it is published in the Tamil language. I don't read the Tamil language, and so the article would not be accessible to me. I would however appreciate it if someone has read the article and could perhaps provide me with some details of its content. Thanks. AppleJuggler 03:07, 1 February 2007 (UTC)
A few things i can think of to make this wiki more closer to a complete reference about the Maestro. 1.) Ilayaraja as a photographer - photography is his hobby. 2.) Ilayaraja's spirituality - the TIS is a musical expression of the spiritual aspect of his life. 3.) A list of interesting facts about Ilayaraja.A few examples: Singer SPB being one of the singers who has worked with almost all the indian film composers over the past 3 decades, was asked on a telugu channel to name yestyear and contemporary composers who had a perfect knowledge of rhythm and rhythmic patterns. SPB said there is only one such person who composes rhythm for his music all by himself and it is Ilayaraja. All others ask their percussionists to play different patterns and select one of them.Ilayaraja writes down what he wants and gives it off to the percussionists to play. Another fact...when his first song for his first movie annakili was to be recorded, things were all set, the count began 1,2,3,4....and there was a power shutdown. This was considered a bad sign by many.We all know how popular the songs from that movie went on to be and where it has brought Ilayaraja today. This is a lesson for all those who believe more in such superstitions and less in their own talents. How the Maestro selected a violinist when ther were 10 of them waiting for 1 vacancy in his orchestra... He dropped a coin on the floor and asked each one of them to produce that sound, of a coin settleing on the ground. ---> From unknown contributor (221.134.214.24)
[edit] Suggestions for improvement from peer reviews
I've cut and paste here some of the comments received from various peer review requests. More may be forthcoming so keep checking via the links provided, as I can't keep cutting and pasting new comments here all the time. But for the time being, here are some constructive comments provided so far. Hope it helps you, dear Wikipedia visitor/editor/improver, to brush up this article. AppleJuggler 04:48, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
- FROM: peer review
Nice article and well-citated. Some remarks:
You could add one more paragraph in the lead. Have you checked WP:LEAD?Yes I've checked WP:LEAD. The single-paragraph lead for this article appears adequate, unless someone else thinks otherwise. Done. AppleJuggler 02:28, 16 November 2006 (UTC)The information about his family could go in "Early life and education", which could be mentioned "Early life and family". This last information in "Music and Career" look like trivia information which is not good. By the way, try to expand a bit "Early life and family"; it looks stubby to me.Done. AppleJuggler 02:28, 16 November 2006 (UTC)"Career and music" is long. You could divide it in further sections, e.g. "Early career", "Mature career", "Traits of his art", where you could further expand and analyse.Done. AppleJuggler 02:29, 16 November 2006 (UTC)- The fact that you have just one photo is not the best thing for FAC. It is not necessary to have more of them, but it would be nice.
Sections "Awards and nominations","Partial discography" and "Literary works" are three sections in a row, which are long and listy. I think you should turn "Awards and nominations" into prose. Now, about "Partial Discography", I'm afraid that in FAC you'll be asked to make it even more partial! "Literary works" could also be turned into prose, but I'm not definite about the necessity of that.--Yannismarou 13:08, 19 October 2006 (UTC) Done. AppleJuggler 02:28, 16 November 2006 (UTC)
- FROM: peer review
- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Ruhrfisch 03:18, 21 October 2006 (UTC)
(please go to the link above to see automated peer review suggestions)
I think that the Career and Music section could do with being divided up into a few subsections. It's well written and referenced, but this is a bit long for one section compared to most articles.Done. AppleJuggler 02:31, 16 November 2006 (UTC)
More images too, how about some of the posters of films he has done the soundtracks for? Puddleman 09:24, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
- FROM: talk page
The lead needs improvement.(I've improved it, but if you think it can be made even better, please leave a note here on the Discussion page and we'll discuss about it AppleJuggler 04:15, 18 November 2006 (UTC))Concert performances looks stubby. You could expand on that or include it in the rest of the article.Done. AppleJuggler 02:28, 16 November 2006 (UTC)Miscellanea could be added to other sections of the article.Done. AppleJuggler 02:28, 16 November 2006 (UTC)Partial discography is too long. They don't seem to like that in FAC.Done. AppleJuggler 02:28, 16 November 2006 (UTC)
These are just some comments. If you desire a review, please use the peer review process. Nat91 03:22, 18 October 2006 (UTC)
The article looks profeesional at the introduction but is not in a physical or mental attractive way for the audience to carry on reading.Amended. AppleJuggler 15:47, 19 November 2006 (UTC)The discography looks shabby and needs sharpening up.The partial discography has been significantly reduced in length and other sources provided for interested readers to obtain a more detailed discography. AppleJuggler 02:28, 16 November 2006 (UTC)- It was a close call between Start and B, but I decided to be harsh on your request.
These are just some comments. If you desire a review, please use the peer review process. Thamizhan 10:08, 18 October 2006 (UTC)
- FROM: Good Article reviewer
If the article was peer-reviewed, some things people would likely say, is that his birth name should be mentioned in the lead section ( DoneAppleJuggler 05:53, 19 November 2006 (UTC)), that the external links should be cleaned up Done AppleJuggler 15:44, 19 November 2006 (UTC)), that it would be nice with a CD- or bookcover of his work, and that it should be expanded. Fred-Chess 08:45, 18 November 2006 (UTC) Done AppleJuggler 03:54, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Resolved Issues
[edit] Done "Ilaiyaraaja" or "Ilayaraja"? -- Consensus Forum
Quite frequently, the composer's name has been changed in the Wikipedia article alternatingly between the above two (or variants of these). I propose that a consensus be reached on an accepted spelling of the composer's name. According to the the supposedly official website (www.raaja.com), the spelling is "Ilaiyaraaja". I propose that this spelling be used for his name consistently, in this Wikipedia article and where it is mentioned elsewhere in Wikipedia. Unless an alternative and correct spelling of the name can be proposed (with evidence, of course, of its correctness), I believe it is safest to stick to the "Ilaiyaraaja" version. Would appreciate opinions and feedback on this. Thanks. AppleJuggler 05:15, 5 August 2006 (UTC)
- This arises from the simple fact that many people in (over) enthusiasm try to transliterate the English form into tamil and get a "new" name in the process. I will try to locate some old Casettes and check the name printed there. WE can then decide based on that. I think that (lookig at the cassette cover) will be a good idea instead of asking opinion from every one. Doctor Bruno Talk 02:52, 24 September 2006 (UTC)
- Dr. Bruno, you have a good point. An academic journal article I found (the one that is referenced in this Ilaiyaraja article) spells his name as "Ilaiyaraaja". This is also how it is spelt on the composer's official website, raaja.com. Would be interesting to see what some of your old cassette tapes would have it as. AppleJuggler 03:46, 24 September 2006 (UTC)
- From the official Ilaiyaraaja page, and various other sources (such as The Hindu newspaper and a peer-reviewed journal article), I have gathered that the correct spelling for Ilaiyaraaja's name is 'Ilaiyaraaja' and have hence redirected the page. Hope everyone's fine with that. AppleJuggler 10:43, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
- Dr. Bruno, you have a good point. An academic journal article I found (the one that is referenced in this Ilaiyaraja article) spells his name as "Ilaiyaraaja". This is also how it is spelt on the composer's official website, raaja.com. Would be interesting to see what some of your old cassette tapes would have it as. AppleJuggler 03:46, 24 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Done Ilaiyaraaja's concert in Italy
We need a source for the statement that he was involved in an Italian music festival. Can someone find it please? If not, I propose we remove that statement. Cheers. AppleJuggler 05:34, 5 August 2006 (UTC)
-
- Managed to find a source for this statement. Hyperlinked it into article. AppleJuggler 11:44, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Done Redirection and merging of page
Page Ilayaraja moved to Ilayaraaja (correct spelling according to official website. See references) -- Ambarish 22:33, 15 Dec 2003 (UTC)
- So spellings in page content need changing? Andy Mabbett 22:37, 15 Dec 2003 (UTC)
- I've just made the changes. Thanks. -- Ambarish 23:06, 15 Dec 2003 (UTC)
Merged in contents of page Ilaiayaraja. There was a photo on either page. I've retained one of them. Any thoughts on what to do with the other? -- Ambarish 23:06, 15 Dec 2003 (UTC)
[edit] Done Biased Statement
I feel that the following words are biased "He has no knowledge of music but tried to get into the industry. He is absolutely overconfident of all and blushes aside all others. He is not a fit music Director"
They should be removed Doctor Bruno 14:06, 27 July 2006 (UTC)
-
- Done. AppleJuggler 05:09, 5 August 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Done Infobox
Would be good if an infobox could be inserted. AppleJuggler 06:38, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
- Done. But the photo's resolution has gone out of whack. Could someone help rectify, or obtain a different photograph that would behave? AppleJuggler 09:24, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Done Reference section
I've created a reference section. I cited Greene (2001), who mentioned the following: "Some film music directors, like Ilaiyaraaja, incorporate the melodies and instruments of village folk music...". This helps substantiate the statement made in this Wiki about Ilaiyaraja's usage of Indian folk elements in popular film music. I urge editors to obtain and cite credible references where and when possible. Thanks. AppleJuggler 08:16, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
Some dude (or dudette) at Wesleyan University had written a Masters thesis in Ethnomusicology and Composition. Anuradha Mohan's thesis, written in 1994, is entitled "Ilaiyaraja: Composer as Phenomenon in Tamil Film Culture" [3]. Is anybody here in a position to obtain a copy of this thesis? AppleJuggler 08:20, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
-
- Done. AppleJuggler 23:41, 12 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Done Discography section
Too long. Will need to trim down on the number of film music albums listed. AppleJuggler 10:12, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
- Done AppleJuggler 02:40, 16 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] GA promoted
I think that the article passes all the necessary criterias for a Good Article. It is well-written, structured, has an image, and well referenced. I understand that the image might be deleted, but what's there to do about it? I understand the difficulty in acquiring a free licensed image of Ilaiyaraaja, and use fair use have become far more restrictive according to the new criterias.
You may however use a fair use image if you write about a previous pediod of, for example if you want to illustrate how he looked in the 1970s.
If the article was peer-reviewed, some things people would likely say, is that his birth name should be mentioned in the lead section, that the external links should be cleaned up, that it would be nice with a CD- or bookcover of his work, and that it should be expanded.
Fred-Chess 08:45, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Done To Do #9
Would a link to IMDB do? This link [4] links to all national film awards listed by year. So, I guess all of the awards that have been credited to Ilaiyaraaja are verifiable. (Apparently, the official website for these awards is down.) --Madhu 12:40, 27 January 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for that, Madhu. AppleJuggler 06:08, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Wikipedia:Non-free content
Apologies for the shouty edit summary, but really, that many fair use sound clips is way out of line, especially when none of them were linked to any sort of commentary in the text and none of them had fair use rationales, as is required. One or two fair use clips should be more than sufficient. Moreschi Talk 09:59, 30 May 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Deletion of Kannada Discography Table
May I ask why the Kannada Discography Table was removed ? Was every table added (say Malayalam) after detailed discussion? Ilaiyaraja has compose music and background score for 26 kannada movies and most of them are sensational musical hits. Further, IR has assisted GK Venkatesh in over 200 films (over 100 of them in kannada). I will very shortly add further reference if needed from IR's biography written in kannada based on a detailed interview with him by Lyricist K.Kalyan. Further, about the sentence directly used from the article, but those were the words of IR himself. Would it be appropriate if that sentence were in quotes with the text IR says. (forgot to sign, guess i took a long wikibreak :-)) -Hamsavanidasa 03:42, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
-
- Strongly disagree with some of the comments by AppleJuggler (on my talk page -> Talk) about the removal of Kannada Discography table. Ilaiyaraja has composed music for 26 movies and the count is more than his albums for Malayalam movies. Further, most of IR's contribution to Kannada film music during the early 80s, which many regard as the peak of his career, is significantly higher than his works in Malayalam. All his albums in Kannada were chartbusters, and he has re-used several of the tunes that he composed during that timeframe later in Tamil,Telugu and very recently in Hindi for "Cheeni Kum". I second user KNM's move to re-insert the Kannada Discography table. If the need to include certain discographies and exclude certain others has been discussed in the past, please provide links to the same, and also, there is no reason why this discussion can be continued now.\Thanks -Hamsavanidasa 09:10, 21 June 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Significance of mentioning Guitarist Ilayaraja
Ilayaraja's role as Guitarist under GK Venkatesh, deserves to be mentioned. OK, my bad, that I copy/pasted the line from the screen article. Applejuggler, Please comment on including a brief subsection in this article on Ilayaraja's contibution as Guitarist for Ilayaraja. The reason why I say this is, between 1969 to 1974, saw a highly significant increase in the usage of Guitar in GKV's kannada films, beginning from the spy theme for one of Dr.Rajkumar's Bond series movies - Goadalli CID 999. Later the combination of L Vaidyanathan and Ilayaraja assisted GKVenkatesh for almost an entire decade, and as IR himself mentioned even after his debut in Annakkili. I think this role of IR as guitarist would look good in this encycolpaedic article, references can be provided from the biography that I mention above. -Hamsavanidasa 03:49, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
-
- Agree with some of the comments by AppleJuggler (on my talk page -> Talk) about mentioning the significance of the guitar music in GKV's works in the article on G.K.Venkatesh. But I do think Ilaiayaraja's role as Guitarist deserves a mention of more than a sentence on IR's talk page, given that this was his "first" exposure in composing for films. -Hamsavanidasa 09:05, 21 June 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Hindi
Recently he composed background music for hindi movie "Chinni kum hai" —Preceding unsigned comment added by 122.161.22.87 (talk) 18:57, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:Ilaiyaraja - Thiruvasakam.jpg
Image:Ilaiyaraja - Thiruvasakam.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
Please go to the image description page and edit it to include a fair use rationale. Using one of the templates at Wikipedia:Fair use rationale guideline is an easy way to insure that your image is in compliance with Wikipedia policy, but remember that you must complete the template. Do not simply insert a blank template on an image page.
If there is other fair use media, consider checking that you have specified the fair use rationale on the other images used on this page. Note that any fair use images uploaded after 4 May, 2006, and lacking such an explanation will be deleted one week after they have been uploaded, as described on criteria for speedy deletion. If you have any questions please ask them at the Media copyright questions page. Thank you.
BetacommandBot 04:55, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Reducing the size of the partial discography section
I propose that we limit the entry for Tamil albums in the discography section to 16 albums, and for all other languages to 10. This is more in proportion with Ilaiyaraaja's work in the various languages. This discography is a partial discography and so we should not overload it with too many entries; just the essential or landmark albums should be included. Sometimes, repetitions are included: the soundtrack to a film that is translated in different languages are included again under a different language heading (e.g., Ajantha, 2007). This is superfluous and unnecessary. AppleJuggler 04:04, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Image:Ilaiyaraaja.jpg
Image:Ilaiyaraaja.jpg states has a incorrect licence. It is a derived version of a copyrighted TV program. It will not come under fair use either. Consider removing it. --Terrance (talk) 02:17, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Sources
Geocities pages are self-published sources, so unless they can clearly be tied to an expert in the field, they have dubious reliability. Commercial pages should also be avoided; the one amazon.com page used here is unnecessary and can be removed. Gimmetrow 05:56, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
- Point noted. AppleJuggler (talk) 06:17, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] References
Many of the Citations in musical style just point to examples. They are not references. Either (a) citation should be removed or (b) real citations from articles be provided or (c) add those examples in the main text. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.94.94.105 (talk) 22:07, 5 June 2008 (UTC)