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[edit] disambig

Acoustic and Milo need disambig. Randomblue (talk) 21:04, 16 January 2008 (UTC)

checking the article I did it to Acoustic Guitar, about Milo, I looked at that Disambig. page and couldn't find which one it would be Samuel Sol (talk) 00:34, 17 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] FAC Comments

• Replace the icons with letters. It tends to confuse readers specially the Australia and New Zealand flags which are hard to recognize because of its nearness of design.
• Not full dates are usually unlinked.
• Do we have to mention all the release dates?
• The song was written by Powderfinger the band's lead singer
• Is the use of "some reviewers" not confusing to readers?
• Despite the reviews, "I Don't Remember" the single charted poorly
• only reaching #42 number 42 or forty-two (to have continues prose without figures).
• The song was written — sure to repeat it?
• Use the sign for flat symbol as in B flat and wikilink it, and do not forget the G minor.
• Link B-side
• I think its fine to de-link riff in the second paragraph.
• For the music videos "for" or for the music videos "of"?
• The band and audience is are comprised
• Since the preceding sentence mentioned "often", any other review(s) other than Kathy McCabe's?
• The list of parodies can be incorporated to the music video section and be re-written into prose.
• "similar to 'Lost and Running', the first single released" from what album? Please indicate.
• "…appropriate "ad" for this album." Oops! Punctuation for "ad" is only a single quotation.
• "Did Bolger 'enjoyed the song'." This is a POVic phrase. Though it's apparent the reviewer likes the song, we can't say he enjoyed the song. (needs verification)
• "and calling it a catchier song then than other works on the album"
• "Reviewer Andrew Tijs from CitySearch Brisbane states stated"
• "though provides mixed reviews when compared with other songs by the group, stating that" Any word other than "state"?
• "It's no eerie ballad like "The Day You Come", nor does it have "Like a Dog"'s snarl, nor "On My Mind"'s pub rock shudder." The singles should be singly quoted.
• Is release under the umbrella of response? Maybe the response could be a subsection of release.
• "then slid four positions to #47 in its second week" They'll know the single slid to four notches.
• pinacle --> pinnacle
• "and then dropped off the chart altogether." Altogether what?
• The entries for US and NZ in the chart are futile because the single was unable to chart. Therefore, remove them or entirely remove the table since only one market was charted.
• Put the sample in the first section and mention some musical structure or any stuff about the music rather than just state "A 20 second sample from Powderfinger's 'I Don't Remember'." The use is not fair.
• Change em dashes to en dash in the track listing section to delimit their corresponding duration (to comply MoS).
• Featuring and Live should be in lowercase.
• Most song-related FAs use colons for personnel and credits.
• Formatting of publication date for citation number three and twenty-one are not consistent.

Please feel free to object. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 00:23, 17 January 2008 (UTC)