Talk:Huss Rides

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[edit] Rewrite needed

I believe this article needs a rewrite because of huge amounts of grammatical error, and is almost unreadable.Nathanhillinbl 22:12, 25 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Pretty good job on rewrite

I think that the editor who did the rewrite did a pretty good job, although clearly the translation still loses some of the nuances (a "roundabout" might be what the original article called the rides, but they are just rides in today's english). Also, the distinction between fair/amusement park/theme park in english and the difference between funfair/entertainment park/fair, etc. in german. The Huss company site generally uses the term amusement park. I am going to also do some more research about the company. The article still needs citations to support its statements that the company is the biggest, etc. I did not put in the tags for these places where citation are needed just yet. Good job! --Tinned Elk 22:53, 27 August 2007 (UTC)