Talk:Hurricane Lisa (2004)

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Hurricane Lisa (2004) was a good article nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There are suggestions below for improving the article. Once these are addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. Reviewed version: Error: invalid time

[edit] GA Review

The storm history is excessively long. It should be summarized a bit more. Are there any non-NHC links? Hurricanehink (talk) 16:29, 23 December 2006 (UTC)

Summarized a bit but otherwise I lose details from the long track. No other links that didn't have information already included. CrazyC83 02:53, 26 December 2006 (UTC)

You can still have details for the long track. However, six paragraphs is a bit overboard. Try merging sentences, eliminate unnecessary details, and I would aim for three or four paragraphs. Hurricanehink (talk) 16:55, 26 December 2006 (UTC)

Since I never really thought about that and need to think more, I withdraw the nomination. CrazyC83 04:02, 28 December 2006 (UTC)