Talk:Hurricane Huko (2002)

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As always, good work. I put it at B, although it needs a copyedit before GAN. There is some awkward wording, and the first sentence of the SH does not make any sense. In the sentence, "Despite never entering the East Pacific, moisture from Huko merged with a trough which moved over California, causing heavy rains that broke various 24–hour rain records along the San Joaquin Valley.", 24–hour rain is supposed to be a hyphen instead of an en dash. You might want to trim the lead down a tad, as well. Cheers. Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 01:05, 7 June 2008 (UTC)

Whoops, didn't notice this. Add metric conversions to the impact section. Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 01:06, 7 June 2008 (UTC)