Talk:Human respiratory syncytial virus

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Spectacular Failure link is a dead link. 149.169.147.166 01:02, 12 September 2007 (UTC)

1 UQ research heralds vaccine technology breakthrough
2 Treatment section too technical
3 Treatment section has more basic problem
4 RSV Season

[edit] UQ research heralds vaccine technology breakthrough

This vaccine [1] may differ from the one mentioned in the Wikipedia article. Brian Pearson 03:55, 9 May 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Treatment section too technical

This article may be too technical for a general audience.
Please help improve this article by providing more context and better explanations of technical details to make it more accessible, without removing technical details.

The treatment section needs to be rephrased in less technical language.--Srleffler 17:10, 23 May 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Treatment section has more basic problem

I disagree that the Treatment section is too technical. It has a more basic problem. Only the first two sentences are about treatment. (as of this date) The sentence beginning "Amino acid sequences 200-225 and ..." and everything following is about a particular, very specialized, bit of research on RSV, not about treatment. It should be removed, or moved to a research section. --7802mark (talk) 15:17, 17 December 2007 (UTC)