Talk:Hourman (android)

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I attempted an edit of this article, doing some grammer edits, trimming, etc. for the first 3rd of it. To be frank, I don't know enough about the subject matter (not being a comic book fan) to be of much use. I suggest a comic book Guru go over this, doing a great deal of trimming to summerize the information contained within. It's far longer than it needs to be. The subject headings don't make much sense. Are these comic books he appeared in, or series or what? It's unclear. Some exposition would be useful. The addition of some information regarding the comic book details of the character would be wise as well (what issues he appeared in, the creators, etc.). Also needs sourcing. --Lendorien 21:22, 24 February 2006 (UTC)

No offense, but if you're not a comic fan, you won't understand it very well, and that's logical, but the subject headers make a lot of sense once you read the stuff they detail. It mostly covers all of Hourman's vital character moments, and should therefore not be shortened to anything.

I appreciate the looking out for grammar edits and stuff, but I don't think this article requires as much cleaning up as you think. I will see about sourcing some of the stuff though and thanks for the help. Kusonaga 06:18, 25 February 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Monthly series?

I'm not very good at summery, but it strikes me as odd that the "His own series" section is pretty much a short recap of the first 2 issues. Not so much as a mention of Bethany? Of all the supporting cast, surely she's important enough to warrent a mention. 172.166.11.97 08:24, 5 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Powers

Why isn't there a powers and abilities section here?

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BetacommandBot (talk) 07:03, 26 February 2008 (UTC)