Talk:Horatia Nelson
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A fact from Horatia Nelson appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know? column on 4 December 2007. |
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[edit] Copy Editing
I don't mean to sound brusque, but the current article uses very long sentences, with many auxiliary clauses. It is quite confusing - sometimes I'm not even sure what meaning is intended. You may want to re-write to clarify. Try Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors if you need some help. -- 21:33, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
