Talk:HLA-B81

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[edit] Confusing

As with the other serotype articles, more effort needs to be made to make the prose accessible to the lay reader. Please explain technical language that the average man on the street will not know. — Brian (talk) 00:28, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

Brian, these serotypes are what they are, you cannot lie to make them something they are not to make the more entertaining. The failing of the Serotype page is not the fault of this page, urge the author(s) of that page to repair it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Pdeitiker (talk • contribs) 18:53, 13 October 2007 (UTC)

I'm not asking you to make them more entertaining. I'm asking you to explain technical language. And I am urging the authors to repair the prose, but posting the banner. — Brian (talk) 21:51, 14 October 2007 (UTC)