User talk:HIS33407Clio

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[edit] David Livingstone

I enjoyed reading your contributions to this article, particularly the introduction (lead section), though I'd suggest dividing it into 2-3 paragraphs. It might also be worthwhile revising the Livingstone's legacy section (which I put in from a limited number of references) to align it with your introduction and the references you've used. I'm sure you're very busy but I feel that compared to your knowledge of the subject I'm groping in the dark. Other aspects which I think should be improved are: viewpoints of African historians on Livingstone, but there don't seem to be any good sources; spinning off separate articles on the Zambezi Expedition and his explorations and travels; and a separate article on missions inspired by Livingstone (incidentally I don't know if you have looked at the London Missionary Society article, which after a catalogue of events and no context, covers the years 1844 to the 1970s in a sentence). Anyway I just wanted to say what a great improvement you've made to the DL page. Regards, Rexparry sydney 23:13, 7 November 2007 (UTC)

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