Talk:History of life imprisonment

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Tuck in!Eschoir (talk) 04:43, 5 February 2008 (UTC)

OK. I'll take a break from editing this now, in case someone else wants to take over and do some more editing. The section "Summation" need to be completely removed or integrated elsewhere, as encylcopedic articles dont have summaries - it is this section that makes the article still feel like an "essay". I think that the section "Accidental History" also needs to be taken apart and rewritten, as it isnt about the history of "life imprisonment" - it is about "imprisonment" in general. John Vandenberg (talk) 14:35, 7 February 2008 (UTC)