Talk:History of film
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I came to make the point about the US-centric standpoint. I see it's already being discussed, but it jumped out immediately to me when reading. I don't know enough to correct it, but discussion of non-US film is comparatively sparse and always under the rubric of 'foreign film.'
[edit] Lazy at the end
Most of this article is pretty good and in depth, but the writer(s) seems to get lazy near the end with odd sentence structures and "short hand". Sentences such as "The history of film and video distributed online began in the year 1994 with the first public showing of Quentin Tarantino's Pulp Fiction. Influence of Comics. Smoke, 1995. In the 1990s, cinema began the process of making another transition, from physical film stock to digital cinema technology. Pixar, The Matrix. Meanwhile, in the home video realm, the DVD would become the new standard for watching movies after their standard theatrical releases. Just look forward to the future." aren't very encyclopedic and need cleaning up. They seem very stream of conscious or something like you would read in an email. Statements need to be explained better and more in depth so the reader can understand why something is that way.
Yes, what the hell is up with 3.8-3.10?? 205.211.141.243 05:46, 6 October 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Birth of cinema
I think this article has a US-English POV bias. The Louis Lumieres brothers are presented (in the middle of the text) merely as some of the creators who helped on technical stuff. But they actually both introduced a major breakthrough in the technical way of making a modern movie, and secondly they are the first ones who actually understood what the cinema was for, that is something meant to have a very large audience - contrary to the other "precursors" who saw it as a toy for very rich people. The Louis Lumieres borthers are, regarding these two aspects, the real inventors of cinema and I think there should be more emphasis on this.
Also, see Louis Le Prince. The birth of cinem part is doubly inaccurate and needs heavy editing.
[edit] Random Early Comments
This article should be better called "History of Cinema in the United States" Is'nt it a shame to be so narrow minded and so arrogant?
We must add bits on daguerrotypes and the introduction of film itself, allowing for multiple copies of a work--surely a crucial development in film history.
I'm not sure what to make of part of the article on France--Truffaut's last film was completed in 1983, and Godard finished one last year (2000). Do you mean that these were influential personalities during that era? Why in that era specifically? What did they do? Would they be as influential now, with later generations continuing to discover their work at revival houses and on video? Also, could I add Louis Malle? (Au Revoir Les Enfants, Damage, My Dinner With Andre)
Plenty of subpages here that could be given new page names. -- Tarquin 10:30 Jul 26, 2002 (PDT)
There seems to have been a vast momement from articles using the word film to using cinema without much discussion. Mintguy (T) 01:36, 6 Feb 2004 (UTC)
Surely more important than storage or display technology is the improvements in digital film camera technology??
[edit] American POV?
Folks, I've created an outline here and am putting in points to briefly cover. I can see this as a very Wiki-dense article. Most of my citations are regarding American cinema, so if anyone wants to include Goddard, Malle, &c. before I get to it please go ahead. -- Zosodada 01:28, 20 Jan 2005 (UTC)
- This page used to be about the technical developments in cinema. You've clearly put a lot of effort into adding material. As you say, almost all of it is about America. I think its gone beyond the point where we can redress the POV — we're not just talking about including Goddard here, we're talking about 'highlights of the 20th century for rest of the world'. Russian? Indian? Chinese? That's just for starters. Plus a lot of American stuff would have to go, if we're to retain some sort of reasonable level of world significance — the article goes into more detail about US cinema than Cinema of the United States! Its an epic task to make this NPOV. The first step would be to delete over half the article, which would be a waste.
- I think it would be easier to split the article into two parts:
- History of cinema in the United States, which would have to be reconciled somehow with Cinema of the United States.
- History of cinema, developed from a brutally edited version of the current article.
- This isn't an attack on American cinema or the work done here, I just think the material needs to be structured properly. Jihg 23:58, Feb 7, 2005 (UTC)
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- I hope to include more world cinema as time allows, this is still under development (the same state as most wiki articles). My primary reference is Oxford History of World Cinema which would be less than half of its size without mention of US cinema. There's plenty of room here for citations of, e.g., the first anime feature, the introduction of color film in the UK, the British studio system, cinema in India and Hong Kong, &c. Most of the sentences here are pretty short and we're a far cry from maxing out on size so there's plenty of room for more info which would be preferable than less. I also see this as a gateway to other Wiki articles. If you care to list your favorite WP articles on non-US world cinema, go ahead and squeeze 'em in. With time the list might be more than a list as it coalesces into prose. I do hope, however, that it is possible to keep the quality of the links on this one up. Personally, I don't feel the need to categorize this history according to country anymore than I would be inclined to dedicate articles entirely to Italian producers, German directors or English actors.Zosodada 06:54, 8 Feb 2005 (UTC)
- So we're agreed the article as it stands is US POV? I appreciate that anybody is free to add their own non-US citations, my point is that this is not going to make the article NPOV within a few days. -- Jihg
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- Considering it's dormant state and largely British bias for -- years? months? -- I, for one, am not concerned with playing beat the clock. If anyone has more energy or time than I do and is up for a marathon editing session, they're welcome to have at it. -- Zosodada
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- There was no British bias, but let's not argue about that. And I'm not suggesting any time limits here. Besides, neither point justifies the current POV: we must change the title, or move material elsewhere, or indicate somehow that the page is currently POV. This is the key issue I'd like to achieve a consensus on. Jihg 09:51, Feb 10, 2005 (UTC)
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- Non-US cinema is not one of Wikipedia's strong points, and its going to take a lot of research and editing to redress the balance here. So what we've got here is a page that will most likely violate policy for weeks or months to come. Hence my suggestion to split the article — it will maintain NPOV while we work. But if you want to move forward from the current article we can do that. We will need to use Template:NPOV or similar until we get close to something resembling neutrality. Also, I think its a shame that a good article on the history of Hoollywood is going to get lost. -- Jihg
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- The basis of your non-NPOV claim seems to be that there is more information here on US cinema than in another article. I see the problem as a dearth of information in the other article, not a surplus here. Zosodada 02:50, 10 Feb 2005 (UTC)
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- I agree there's a lack of information. However you put it, the article is unbalanced. Jihg 09:51, Feb 10, 2005 (UTC)
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Zosodada, can we drag the discussion back to my original point: Do you agree that the page as it stands is unintenionally POV? Would you support any of the suggestions I've made: we change the title, or move material elsewhere, or indicate somehow that the page is currently POV? Or have you an alternative plan which will help this page conform to Wikipedia policy? Jihg 09:40, Feb 11, 2005 (UTC)
- No, I still don't agree. It's still too early in the development to claim POV or bias. I don't support changing the title. Some of the material could be moved elsewhere, yes. Much of the material has been moved elsewhere, e.g. Vitascope now has its own article. This doesn't suggest that much should be removed from here. I see someone -- perhaps yourself? -- has reformatted the outline to incorporate the three-part outline that Nowell-Smith uses while still retaining the ages of H'wd as sub-headers. I think this is something that is quite agreeable to both of us. (I had avoided it as not to lean too heavily on OHWD, but this doesn't look as derivative as I had imagined.) As for an alternative plan I would suggest either adding to the outline to incorporate any subjects you think are overlooked, or, alternatively, completely reformatting to a "timeline" style as in the first sections. Zosodada 20:27, 14 Feb 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Reference books
- US cinema may dominate reference books, but that's mainly an excess of material of relative unimportance to cinema in general. If you had to summarise your Oxford History (like, in an encyclopedia article...) then US cinema would be a major theme, but it would be massively POV to proportion it like the original book. -- Jihg
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- I don't understand this point, sorry. -- Z.
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- Sorry, it was made badly. I was trying to say that a bias towards US material in reference works doesn't justify an equal bias in this article. Jihg 09:51, Feb 10, 2005 (UTC)
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- Have you read OHWC? If you're suggesting that it's biased that you obviously see bias everywhere. There is more information about US cinema because there is more work coming from the US than any other during most of the history (of course, Indian cinema holds the banner on the basis of quantity at this point.) Trying to spin it otherwise is bias in favor of historical revisionism. Zosodada 18:38, 10 Feb 2005 (UTC)
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- I'm not suggesting OHWC, which I've never read, is biased. I was objecting to "My primary reference is OHWC which would be less than half of its size without mention of US cinema" as a justification for a similar proportion of US cinema in this article. It was a small point, and discussing it is going nowhere. Honestly, it looks like a great book! Jihg 09:40, Feb 11, 2005 (UTC)
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[edit] National cinemas
- Also, nationality of production is generally agreed to be the most practical way to make sense of the vast world of cinema, as reflected in the majority of writing on the subject. It has nothing to do with nationalism or even the nationality of the people involved. There are many trans-national themes, but they're usually looked at in the context of national cinemas. This page will have to reflect that, up to a point. Jihg 13:54, Feb 8, 2005 (UTC)
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- I disagree with your second point, the national origin of any non-politically motivated work is relatively unimportant to issues of style, genre, theme, content and context and the historic precedent and significance set by the technical or artistic achievements in the works that secures their place in the greater history. As this is a history, the structural context should be historical and chronological rather than political, although a political history of film is a worthy idea for another article. -- Z.
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- Are you kidding? OK, one could easily make too much of 'national cinemas', and all the other things you mention are important. But nationality is one of the fundamental organisational concepts of film studies, especially when writing histories. The majority of British films of the 1930s are more similar to each other than they are to American or German films of the same period, in style and in the context in which they were made. The significance of a film differs between cultures. Clearly there are exceptions to both these generalisations, but they're extremely useful in understanding the history of cinema. Political content has nothing to do with it. Jihg 09:51, Feb 10, 2005 (UTC)
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- I'm sorry, I see national boundaries as political constructions. British cinemas in the 1930's were largely dominated by American movies. If you'd like to add a bit about Zoltan Korda and King Vidor, please go ahead, I haven't even gotten to include The Third Man yet. Zosodada 18:38, 10 Feb 2005 (UTC)
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- Nations can also have distinct cultures. Many have had distinct cinematic histories. Denying this is POV. Also, we talking about national production: box office dominance of the US doesn't void the fact that other countries made their own films.
- This has developed into a vague argument with no immediate consequences for the page. I think we've both entrenched ourselves in somewhat extreme positions. Could we agree that the cultural context of a film's production can have an affect on its style, genre, theme, ...? Jihg 09:40, Feb 11, 2005 (UTC)
- Well, I think the new additions by many people are legitimate improvements. What items for inclusion do you feel would balance this out in the direction you're pulling for? I would be more interested in your suggestions for additions rather than subtractions at the moment. Once this is fleshed out some consideration for info movement or article creation might be useful. Zosodada 20:27, 14 Feb 2005 (UTC)
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[edit] New Hollywood
Why is New Hollywood not mentioned at all in this article? I think this is a important aspect of (American) cinema, shifting the balance of power and all (producers lost their powers while directors became more important). I was wondering if there was any reason it was not included in this article?
- I don't know. Probably worth mentioning in that time period, most of the article really needs to be rewritten anyway MechBrowman 23:27, Apr 18, 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Maverick directors
I've removed this director list as I'm not really sure how it fits in. But if someone wants to expand on it and go into the autuer theory or whatever then please do. JW 00:52, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Merge with film
An anon user wrote this:
- {{merge|Film]] How can such an enormous article, with all this data, exist when "cinema" defaults to "film"? There are two competing major articles, unlinked to each other or to their attachments. Good grief!
I didn't correct the merge template and just removed it because an article on the history of a topic is quite common. Music and History of music for example. The article on film and an article on the history of cinema are quite different. MechBrowman 20:53, Jun 8, 2005 (UTC)
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- The main issue here, for me, is that the Film article all but declares that Film is the Wikipedia default term for "movies", "moving pictures", "motion pictures" - and "cinema". This defaultness is confirmed by the fact that, using the site search engine for all these terms, the user is redirected to the Film article as the starting point (actually, "Cinema" first takes you to a Disambiguation page, which then leads to Film as regards the medium itself). So I've been using this official starting-point to contribute some things about episodes in the history of "Film", and correcting terminology to "film" in standing articles and then...
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- ...then here - and I don't even remember how I stumbled on it - is this enormous timeline-article called History of Cinema, which expands on the narrative text in the Film article - which *does* address the History of Film so cannot be said to be "quite different" except in the matter of style (narrative text) and precision (general, and for some periods incomplete). They are, in short, much the same thing, in two different formats, using two different primary terms, and not interconnected; plus this one is "hidden" from the search engine for anyone seeking the starting-point. It may be perfectly correct to make this a subsidiary article to the current Film article, but in any case they should be merged at least at the level of a link, and this one retitled History of Film - as in your example, Music and History of Music, the key term is the common "Music".
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Putting up a merge flag seemed to me the best way to draw this matter into the open, altho a subsequent examination of the list of items to be "merged" at the "Village Pump" suggests it could be years before anyone might actually get around to acting on it, at which point all the more damage would be done in terms of two series of parallel articles. At least, we've brought the problem to the surface where, hopefully, it can be fixed so that we have ONE set of articles, logically treed and available to all users and contributors.
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Is "Film" really the WP default term? Movies, film, cinema are all used in various places. Articles on national cinemas are all titled "Cinema of..." JW
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- Like I said, use the search field and insert any other term - motion pictures, movies, moving pictures, cinema - and see to which page you're redirected - Film. Then, read the first paragraph, and look at all the stuff that's linked to the article at the bottom.
- See for yourself, as I did... Anon.
Making the articles consitent is definitely something that should be done, or at least make it clear in the into paragraphs that film, cinema, ect. mean the same thing in this context. I'm still confused about this merge. Do you feel that the articles should be merged? Or do you just feel that this article should be moved to History of Film? MechBrowman 16:53, Jun 13, 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Question
Does anyone know why it seems like the the names of actors on the covers of movies (movie artwork) are so consistently transposed? [1] what's with that?!--Deglr6328 20:44, 16 July 2005 (UTC)
[edit] A hail of bullet points! + Making the article stand on its own
After much eyeing of this article, I have (drum roll, please) partially corrected the citation format in the print References section. It was the only quickly and easily improved thing I could see in the whole article. Like almost everyone, I think, I'm paralyzed by the size of the project and the fear of stepping on some of the many toes involved. Be that as it may, two broad questions that could help start us on the road to significantly improving this huge thing:
1) What to do with those early sections and their long list of bulleted milestones and semi-milestones? There's a lot of interesting and not irrelevant information there that part of me hates to lose. But I feel like it is, first of all, too much to digest for most of the people who will come here; paring down to more key milestones and giving them a little more context is in order. (This goes doubly if we are indeed going to add a lot more information about non-U.S. film - this article will quickly become too large and unwieldy.) Second of all, these need to be reorganized and rewritten into narrative format, rather than list format. That many bullet points gets to be an eyesore and looks amateurish.
2) I feel like this article ought to be able to stand on its own for the relatively casual reader who comes here, in the sense that they shouldn't have to follow up Wikilinks to understand what we're talking about (even though they can if they want to learn more on a particular topic). Any even somewhat specialized term - technical, critical, or other varieties - ought to receive at least a few words of definition or context. "Production code" and "studio system" stand out as examples as I scan through the text.
I hope people are reading and will give their votes on one or both of the above suggestions. Be forewarned, I'm liable to just go ahead and start doing them if nobody objects. :) Michael Wells 04:04, 12 October 2005 (UTC)
A quick followup: Speaking of the bulleted lists, looking at the Precursors of Film section. Does anyone think maybe most of that ought to be moved and expanded into its own article? Again, interesting stuff, but too much by half. A few quick lines at most on that subject, with a couple examples, ought to be enough to start out this article. It's "History of Film," after all, not "History of Things That Are Sort of Like Film." Michael Wells 04:14, 12 October 2005 (UTC)
- My votes:
- (1) Yes please! Trim the fat! Separate articles can always be created for the stuff that insufficiently important to be in this article.
- (2) Absolutely! Yes!
- Followup point: Yes!!
- Summary: Woo! Yeah! You go Michael! Been wanting to do this myself for ages but it was too daunting. The Singing Badger 11:59, 12 October 2005 (UTC)
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- Well, I didn't say I wanted to do it all myself or that I thought I could do a terribly good job of it that way. But thanks for the encouragement. Too daunting by oneself, I agree... but two's company, Badger. Pick a section or just a paragraph. Have at it. And I know there are others listening.
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- Reading more of the article, there are way too many randomly listed "Hollywood favorites" in among the good information. More context and more of a story of development are needed. Actually, Cinema of the United States, which this article sort of is for large stretches, is much stronger on that point and isn't a bad example to look to (although I haven't read the whole thing). Maybe some stuff could be moved over from here to there. Michael Wells 01:41, 13 October 2005 (UTC)
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- Well, they tell us to edit boldly, so I just did. I created a new Precursors of film article and moved that whole section over there. Then I wrote up a drastically condensed version of its material to put in its place for History of Film. I wanna pull more stuff on the 1890s out of Precursors of film and work it in, but it's late and I'm tired.
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- Feel free to squawk or just start reverting if you feel I've jumped the gun. But somebody had to get this party started. Jump in, the water's fine! Michael Wells 04:14, 13 October 2005 (UTC)
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- Great work, this is looking much better! Will definitely start helping out here at some point in the near future when time permits; it's looking a lot less scary now. The Singing Badger 12:44, 13 October 2005 (UTC)
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[edit] Weird problem in References
Um, why is the first entry (Acker) doing that? Did I just do that? I can't see anything in edit mode that would cause that to happen. Anyone? Michael Wells 03:45, 14 October 2005 (UTC)
- Don't put a space at the beginning of a line. It makes it go like that. I've no idea why. The Singing Badger 13:21, 14 October 2005 (UTC)
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[edit] Too much text makes Wikipedia mad!
Now I did it. The article is so long now that Wikipedia complains when I choose "edit" for the whole page that it exceeds recommended length, and moreover won't let me make any changes... at least I think that's the problem, because it will let me edit individual subsections. The problem then is that you can't add a general intro at the top of the page, which is much needed to conform to Wikipedia standards, and just as a matter of good writing.
It is awfully long... I haven't actually cut down the length of the opening section at all, only added text to it, although I like to think it's more coherent and readable. Too much minute discussion of individual inventions? Should the "Technological ancestors" section be cut way down, letting the Precursors of film link do most of that work? We're only going to be adding even more stuff to later sections, presumably. If the article's already so long that Wikipedia freaks out... oy. How do we succinctify (not a real word) this stuff? Michael Wells 23:58, 14 October 2005 (UTC)
- By removing most of it into separate articles. Each section can then be just a brief digest that refers the reader to a longer article. See History of theatre for a (rather crappy) example. The Singing Badger 00:33, 15 October 2005 (UTC)
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- (sigh.) Is true. I got carried away trying to make this the be-all, end-all article on the subject. I've gone back and hacked out big chunks of my verbosity, and moved some sentences that I think are very useful or needed into the appropriate separate articles. (There is a lot of very strong material in these, but the fear of tackling the big overview articles keeps them at a lower level, I think. I wish some of these writers would come and contribute their two bits to History of Film.) More hacking to come, probably, along with the writing. Michael Wells 06:21, 15 October 2005 (UTC)
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- Take a look at Wikipedia:Cinema Collaboration of the Week - you can use it to try to drum up interest... The Singing Badger 14:25, 15 October 2005 (UTC)
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- The problem with this article is that its had a bit of an identity crisis. It started off as a technical history of cinema, which is why the early section was so long. Then someone decided all articles with "Cinema" in the title should be changed to "film", so this became "History of Film", which has a slightly different meaning. So then it was re-written as basically a history of Hollywood film. Its been POV'd down quite a bit, but it still doesn't quite know what it is. Can it really be a history of cinema or is that way too ambitious? Should it be about the film industry and not individual films, or should it revert to being an article about the technical side of making films? JW 13:17, 18 October 2005 (UTC)
- Some interesting points, Jeff, and it's nice to hear another voice in here. But if we just make this a technical article, where do we put the history of the aesthetic/artistic developments and movements throughout cinema history? Or of the business side of cinema? And that's even assuming the three strands can be cleanly separated, which I don't think they can. As more than one of the film history books I've been consulting have pointed out, film is more dependent on technology than any art form before it, and the developments in film art are strongly driven by technical developments, and vice versa. Which in turn means that business considerations have been tightly wedded to most film developments, given the amounts of money generally needed to create movies.
- On the questions of "too ambitious" or not, if we can have, say, a History of China article, I don't see why we can't have a History of Film article. After all, China's been around even longer than the movies.
- But seriously: To me, the question is what exactly "History of Film" means in this context. As a rule of thumb, I've been trying to keep what I'm writing focused pretty strongly on developments that had broad implications for cinema as a global medium. On the question of "individual films" (and individual film artists, for that matter), I've been trying not to load down the text with laundry lists of titles and directors and performers, no matter how much it hurts to leave out some of them. So, yes, to my mind, I think it ought to be about the industry and the art form broadly. Of course, individual films and artists have sparked off whole trends, and in any case you can't tell the story without some concrete examples. At that point, a certain arbitrariness enters the equation, as who I mention and who I don't has much to do with whim and personal tastes and perceptions, and plain, ol' space considerations. Another thing is that not being a tech-savvy type of guy, I tend not to have much about the technical developments (discussions of different film sizes and stocks and aspect ratios and lenses tend to lose me). Somebody else might say more mention should be made of exactly these matters, and they might be right. Which is why no Wikipedia article is supposed to be the work of just one person.
- On a related point, I think my above pontification about explaining all the terms and names and not leaning on Wikilinks was naive and, well, too ambitious. There just isn't space, and it seems like we do have to lean on the Wikilinks pretty hard. Still, I try to put in at least a few words of definition in most cases. I'm also trying to work in a sizeable but carefully chosen bunch of relevant Wikilinks that will broaden out the compacted and inevitably oversimplified story, but not to the point where the text becomes a big block of blue lettering, which to my taste is off-putting to read.
- Speaking of History of China, I was glancing over it, and its example could be a little helpful. The sidebars linking to separate, related articles is an idea that could be well adapted to this and similar articles. But I'm afraid that's a little beyond me (see above, re. non-tech-savvy).
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- Um, ok, shutting up now.
- Michael Wells 23:59, 18 October 2005 (UTC)
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- What have you got in mind for the general shape of the article then? The more I look at it, the more I think the article doesn't really work after about 1940. I don't really know what the answer is at the moment. I suppose, like the History of China page, this should serve as an introduction to the subject, and not try and go into great detail. Should that also mean discussing genres and national industries? Are there other articles that cover the technical developments adequately (3d, digital film, CGI, cinerama, etc) or does that still need to be an important part of it? Is a strictly chronological structure best, or do we need different sections on the industry, film theory, etc.? JW 13:03, 21 October 2005 (UTC)
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- Oy, good questions all. I'm kind of figuring that all out as I write (as I write this comment, I've only gotten up to just before the 1920s). I didn't think the whole article worked, before or after 1940 - which I don't enjoy saying, since there was so much obviously sincere effort, and some good material.
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- I guess the vague outline in my head is like this: a chronological, narrative account that touches on some ("all" is impossible) of the most influential developments and broad movements in world film; that in the process gives some idea of the broad reach and variety of cinema around the globe during the last century; that tosses in a decent number of concrete examples, including plenty of carefully chosen wikilinks to lead readers to more detailed explication of important topics; and that is nevertheless fairly intelligible to the general reader on its own. This includes, in my mind, the art/aesthetics of film, the business of film and technical developments, which, again, I find tough to separate. With some of the more prominent national cinemas and genres noted, at least insofar as their influence becomes international or affects the medium in general. I don't think this is too much to bite off; it's more or less what any main encyclopedia article on a major topic aims for. And I think it's compatible with what you describe as "an introduction to the subject."
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- Couldn't it help if we made three separate articles: History of Film (technology), History of Film (industry) and History of Film (art form)? The first would contain stuff about sound, color and computer animation, the second on sales and box office success, and the third would be a careful skeleton article on the new waves and great directors, using some international standard art movie reference. varbal 22:12, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Michael Wells 20:30, 21 October 2005 (UTC)
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I don't know why but someone has tagged the article for "inappropriate tone", which doesn't seem really accurate to me. I'm seriously tempted to remove it... JW 10:40, 27 October 2005 (UTC)
[edit] "Inappropriate tone" tag?
Yeah, it seems odd that the tag urges us to discuss this on the Talk page, but the person who put it there gives no explanation for their view. I mean, everyone's entitled to contribute, of course, but it's not terribly helpful to stick it up there anonymously without starting an accompanying discussion. I'd be inclined to take it down after a few days if no more explanation is forthcoming (or if no one else steps in to agree with the tag and elaborate). Although presumably it's my prose that's being critiqued, so I'm hardly objective in the matter.
I am trying to make the style at least slightly pleasurable to read and not too dreadfully dry. Do I cross the line into editorializing at certain points? It would be useful to have some feedback on that.
Michael Wells 00:16, 28 October 2005 (UTC)
- I removed it because it doesn't seem very accurate, and we know this article is still going through a re-writing process. JW 10:51, 4 November 2005 (UTC)
- Looking at it at the moment I would say the main issue with the style is there are a number of sections with numerous sentance fragments, and links that have no real context - for example in the 1990s it has a sentance 'Pixar, The Matrix.', where the sentance on either side has anything to do with either thing. What did the person adding these want to indicate about either's contribution to the history of film? Sfnhltb 17:42, 18 March 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Epic Film
I've been cleaning up links to Epic dab page and have been simply removing any link that is intended to explain "epic film" as there does not appear to be any addition information to be gained (currently) by clicking through the Epic page. If anyone believes there is more that can be said about the term than "a film with a vast scale" and is interested in creating such an article, do so and let me know.
- Answering my own question - I found Epic film and have been using it. Sorry I didn't sign. John (Jwy) 18:10, 11 January 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Film industry merge
The film industry article's history of film section is a duplicate (with more detail in some areas) of this page, and needs to be merged here. At the very most, the history on that page should be covering the highlights which impacted the development of the business side of film only. Anyone who wants to lend a hand in this merge, please feel free. -Harmil 16:51, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
The film industry page contains a large section on Hollywood which is copied from the Hollywood page and should probably be removed. JW 22:54, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Nothing about color
I don't know much about film but I was researching the history of television and film and I could not find out when the first color film/movies started.. Perhaps this should/could be included in the article? I see sound is in there. Volksgeist 11:40, 6 June 2006 (UTC)
- I agree, color should be treated in this article, if only minimally, with a link to some other article for more information. As it stands now there is absolutely no mention whatsoever of the history, technology, or impact of color in films. --74.136.192.115 (talk) 00:31, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Revert of edits by "Donteatyellowsnow"
I've just reverted a series of edits by User:Donteatyellowsnow. I'm normally loathe to bulk-revert edits unless they are obvious vandalism, and there may be a few elements in there that are salvageable. However, for the most part, these changes seemed to add a very distinct POV to the article, skewing it in a pro-Hollywood and anti-other jurisdiction manner. I noted these changes after the same editor made similar POV changes to a related article, and wrote a very POV article at Runaway film. Someone might wish to check out the edits at Quentin Tarantino as well. (By the way, I've also rewritten Runaway film to try to remove the POV, using the same sources already used in the initial edit. Please let me know if you can think of ways to improve and build upon it. Thanks.) --Ckatzchatspy 07:02, 13 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] NPOV
This article should be called History of Hollywood
[edit] Roundhay Garden Scene
Why is the Roundhay Garden Scene regarded as the first film when the Lumiere Brothers's stuff was being shown three years previously? Ed zeppelin 20:44, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Public showing
"Paul had the idea of displaying moving pictures for group audiences, rather than just to individual viewers, and invented a film projector, giving his first public showing in 1895."
I would love to see a cite for this. Most books put his first public showing in february 1896. --Tethur 10:50, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Coverage of other countries and new facts
I am about to considerably expand the section up to 1920 to give coverage of the history of film in other countries besides the USA, and to take account of important new factual knowledge about the period that has appeared in the last 30 years, but which is missing from the entry. Barrysalt 23:51, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Fair use rationale for Image:Melstud2.gif
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[edit] Desperately needs rewriting, chunking, and editing
Whoa! This article is incredibly difficult for a newcomer to the subject to understand, and must be one of the worst long Wikipedia articles that hasn't been hijacked by a field's fringe group. Each individual section needs to be shortened to a brief paragraph with relevant information being split off into a different article. The article also needs to be linked with related relevant articles so that newcomers like I can get a better context of the subject matter. (For example, D.W. Griffith is mentioned constantly, but his name is never wiki-linked. Who the hell is he? He must be important, but I have no idea why.) Technical terms need to be defined at the beginning of the paragraph about their creation, whereas now they're only defined at the end or not at all. I understand how hard it is for any one person to make sweeping changes to such an article that covers so much material. But this article must be one of the most unreadable in the entire encyclopedia, which is a shame when one thinks of the importance of the topic. Please, film pople, do better... Soon.--Cassmus 08:32, 10 November 2007 (UTC)