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[edit] Arrival of the Dutch

Most survivors were left with no option but to work for the Europeans in an exploitative arrangement that differed little from slavery.

Does "exploitative arrangement that differed little from slavery" mean "indentured servitude"? It's not very clear what the arrangement was, exactly. 74.74.221.4 03:30, 28 October 2007 (UTC) Jason

[edit] POV

The anonymous editor 193.254.155.48 has made fairly large changes to this article, carefully inserting pro-Boer bias wherever possible, and removing anything remotely critical. There are also good-looking factual changes included as well, so I don't just want to revert everything. However, it does need some more work to remove the bias. For convenience, here's a link to the changes made by this editor: [1] Greenman 16:02, 5 August 2005 (UTC)

Seems like quite a lot of work went into this. Do we know this editor ? They have only done this page from this IP, but perhaps someone recognises the style ? Wizzy…☎ 14:51, August 6, 2005 (UTC)
I've reverted the changes. As I see it, the problems with this batch of edits were as follows: (1) lots and lots of spelling, grammar, and formatting problems; (2) strong pro-Boer POV; (3) too much done all at once; (4) too many controversial edits done without consultation on the the talk page. It's quite possible that the article had somewhat of a pro-British/anti-Boer slant before, but these edits simply dripped pro-Boer POV. If 193.254.155.48 wants come back and work on this in a more consultative way, that would be great.--Bcrowell 15:16, 6 August 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Need a good image for lead; or continue process of spinning off sub-articles?

This article really looks bare without an image next to the lead. Any ideas? Looking through the images in this article, and in History of South Africa in the apartheid era, I'm not finding much that seems appropriate. Another possibility would be to do it sort of like History of the United States, where you have one main article that starts with a table of contents, and does little more than point to the sub-articles. To me, the current state of the article seems a little strange and asymmetric, since the apartheid-era stuff has been spun off, but the colonial and post-apartheid stuff hasn't. Maybe the difficulty of finding a properly iconic image is really a symptom of the fact that the article is in this strange state. If people agree with the idea of continuing the spinning-off process, what would be a good periodization, and good titles?--Bcrowell 15:30, 6 August 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Improvement drive

A related topic, spice trade, is currently nominated on WP:IDRIVE. Support or comment on the nomination there if you are interested.--Fenice 09:37, 8 August 2005 (UTC)

[edit] South Africa's missing history

"Although many important events occurred during this period, apartheid was the central fact around which most of the historical issues of this period revolved."

Sure, apartheid happened. But alot more happened in South Africa! The weapons trade with Israel? The nuclear bomb development? The differing governments and their policies?

Just because apartheid is what the rest of the world focuses on does not mean it was the sole event in this period of South Africa's history. I'd hope that this article does not get featured article status before this issue is addressed - Political Correctness should not coax the editors of this article into swaying away from an integral part of the country's history.

- G 13:26, 9 October 2005 (UTC)

[edit] British and Dutch version of this Article

The British and Dutch version of this article concerning the British colonization of South Africa do not match. --Martin253 22:11, 7 November 2005 (UTC)

[edit] The French Revolution and its effect on the History of South Africa

I need to verify this and shore up the facts, but... The arrival of the English at the Cape was not simply to 'fill a vacuum'! What I believe happened is this. After the French Revolution, the possibilty of a revolution spreading through Europe placed the position of European royalty and nobility in jeopardy. The surrounding Monarchies rallied behind what was left of the deposed French nobility and under threat of war attempted to sway the revolutionaries to reinstate the monarchy. The revolutionaries retailated by threatening to take the revolution to these countries. The Dutch Prince of Orange approached the English Monarchy for help, and the Cape of Good hope was traded for the protection of the Dutch royalty. Though no revolution occurred in the Netherlands, Napoleon's army invaded. The British sent a warship to the Cape, and when they landed on the shores of False Bay and presented to the Dutch settlers the news that the Cape was now English sovereign territory, the settlers did not believe them and the Battle of Muizenberg ensued. The British were victorious. When, some months later, the news arrived from the Netherlands that the English had indeed been given the Cape, Gordon - the commander of the Dutch force at the Cape - after whom Gordon's Bay is named, committed suicide. Potion 21:52, 30 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Transition Period Missing

South Africa didn't simply go from the Apartheid era to Post-Apartheid. There was a wonderful transition that seems to have gotten lost, beginning 1990 when the ANC was unbanned and Mandela was released, and ending in 1994 with the first democratic election. Does anybody want to write a main article on the transition period? Please lets not forget our heritage Ethnopunk 11:06, 24 March 2006 (UTC)

re: Main articles - these are usually spun out when they get too big for the original (this ..) article. Can you try (as you are doing) expanding it here, and if size warrants, then doing a separate article ?
Also, do check 1990 in South Africa, 1991 in South Africa, 1992 in South Africa, 1993 in South Africa, etc.., but, you are right, it needs expansion here. Wizzy…☎ 11:59, 24 March 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Initial Colonization

I remember hearing that when the Dutch first colonized South Africa, the boers colonized in areas that were completely uninhabited, and it wasn't until the English arrived that there was any contact between Europeans and Africans in the region. Can anyone confirm this? R'son-W 06:51, 25 April 2006 (UTC)

Simply not true, although the fiction of an empty land colonised by Europeans suited successive white governments. Early colonisation was characterised by continous contact between Europeans and Khoikhoi in the frontier zone - ships had been bartering with Khoikhoi inhabitants of Table Bay for 60 years before the Dutch founded a settlement at Cape Town - and there was contact between Europeans and Bantu-speaking African people from the early 1700s. Humansdorpie 20:57, 14 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Into the Future

I think that ending this article with comment on emigration and gated communities is POV. In fact, though gated communities may be fairly prevalent in Johannesburg's northern suburbs, that's really only of concern to wealthy people who reside in Johannesburg, a fraction of the country's population.

I propose (me or someone else) rewriting the end to be more NPOV. I'll park that thought for now - any ideas are appreciated. Caroline Greenway 09:45, 13 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] kingdom to republic

when did south africa become a republic and how? I can't see it mentioned in the article 82.110.109.208 14:42, 16 August 2006 (UTC)

The move from Union - not Kingdom :) - gets a brief mention at History_of_South_Africa_in_the_apartheid_era#International_relations, a sub-article of this one. Could do with a mention here though, and a more complete writeup. Greenman 23:00, 20 August 2006 (UTC)

There's a lot about the move to republic in the article on H.F. Verwoerd, the NP prime minister who got the referendum through. The Union was a Dominion of the British Empire previously and the British monarch was also monarch of the Dominions, including South Africa. Wikipedia has an article on King of South Africa. Under Union, the head of state was the British high commissioner; with republic, S.A. got an independent state president -- mostly ceremonial until the 1983 constitutional revision which abolished the Westminster style parliament & established a strong executive presidency, comparable to de Gaulle's changes in France. Chris Lowe 05:33, 30 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Article should be delisted as Good Article

This article fails to meet at least three major Good Article criteria: quality of writing, logical structure, and breadth of coverage. There are some factual accuracy issues as well although sometimes they may derive from writing problems or lack of breadth problems.

The most fundamental problem is the lack of breadth which also is a POV problem. The article greatly overemphasizes the history of white South Africans and narrow political & military history at the expense of the majority of the people and of economic and social history in which the sources of much of the political history are to be found.

The logical flow problems are related to this content bias. It has an intro, then an overview of "modern South African history" i.e. the period of white colonization and settlement down to the present, then a very cursory and factually problematic discussion of the history prior to white arrival, reflecting virtually none of the archaeological, historical linguistic and historical scholarship of the last 50 years on precolonial history. Then we launch into "modern" i.e. mostly white history again, repetitiously, with more political-military detail, Africans appearing mainly as military enemies. In the 20th century there is a tremendous imbalance in the stress on participation in the World Wars.

The person who complained about overemphasis on apartheid is sort of right although partly for the wrong reasons -- it is not that the emphasis is p.c., but that it doesn't deal with the social and cultural transformations that shaped 20th century South Africa, created by the mineral and industrial revolutions. Those forces drew or forced first a majority of Afrikaner boers (farmers) off the land, often in conditions of considerable poverty, along with many Coloured and Indian South Africans, and did the same to Africans at a lagging rate proportionally, though because of the African demographic majority even an urban-oriented minority rivalled the urban white population.

Without that context, the creation of Afrikaner nationalism as a populist movement, the rise of National Party dominance, and the appeal of apartheid to S.A. whites cannot be understood. Even more significantly, the tremendous social and cultural changes in African life are almost completely invisible (to give just one example, the first S.A. Union census shows about 10% of Africans as Christian; by 1990 the figure would be about 90% self-reported, although maybe half of those belonged to "independent" churches some of which were not recognized by many orthodox denominations, esp. the more conservative). Likewise neither the sources nor the effects of the bantustan policies, whether in population removals or efforts to de-nationalize Africans and deny them S.A. citizenship, can be understood without grasping the history of land and its use, and the forms of segregation and economic domination created prior to 1948, by both Afrikaans-speaking and English-speaking whites.

To a very large extent this reads like a high school or maybe basic university textbook written for English-speaking white South Africans from about the 1970s.

I would simply move to delist the article as "Good" except that a) I need to figure out how to do the technical stuff and b) it appears that good etiquette requires raising the issues here first. Those who may be concerned should consider (some of, by no means all in detail) the issues raised.

Chris Lowe 06:08, 30 November 2006 (UTC)

fair comment,chris. --Severino 17:47, 14 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Mandela: The Authorised Biography

I am trying to expand this article, mainly focusing on the differences between this book and other accounts (books and otherwise) of South Africa throughout this period. Any comments or suggestions are appreciated on the peer review page: "http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Mandela:_The_Authorised_Biography" BillMasen 17:38, 7 December 2006 (UTC)


[edit] President

quote: "This was the first time that there was a South African president in sixty years, since the days of the old Transvaal South African Republic when President Paul Kruger was exiled by the British in 1900. "

unlike swart, kruger wasnt president of south africa, only of transvaal("south african republic"). you cant compare the one with the other. --Severino 22:47, 10 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Neutral article?

Some of the sources given for the crime section are erroneous. Sarcastic Sid 02:15, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

Some very dodgy contributions in the crime section on here. I've made some changes which I hope give the article a bit more credible clout.

Regards. Sarcastic Sid 04:53, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Failed-GA

Neutrality is disputed and almost none of this content has been attributed. Perspicacite 05:11, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] nelson mandela

        nelson mandela was a freedom fighter and was a symbol of freedom.

by:shadae graham —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.190.67.197 (talk)