Talk:History of Haitian Nationality and Citizenship

The page is starting to look good, keep it up!

A short (one-to-three sentence) introduction at the start of the article would be useful.
Replace "miscegenation" with a more neutral term.
Use of "citizens" in the Code Noir section seems anachronistic. Aren't they just subjects of the king? Careful with your use of this term elsewhere as well.
"Colonists and imperial administrators created a new public sphere by constructing racial sexual stereotypes unfit for civil life." The meaning of this sentence is unclear to me.
Detail about uniqueness of free black planters under "Haitian Revolution" section is a repetition.
It is a good idea to present two narratives, but explain why you do it by framing them more clearly (who produces each side?).
Section on foreign recognition is interesting, but how does it pertain to nationality?
The section on law is great. It is not all Constitutional law, however. How was "white" defined in these laws?
In the diaspora section, do you mean "out of the question" instead of "unquestionable"?

Will Hanley (talk) 17:03, 23 November 2007 (UTC)