User talk:Hickoryhillster
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[edit] Constitution Project
Please see this edit to see how to get properly formatted automatically sorted sources. Remember, external links only have single brackets around them. Double brackets are exclusively for internal links within Wikipedia. - Mgm|(talk) 12:53, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Did you know
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On 1 December 2006, Did you know? was updated with a fact from the article Nicole Seligman, which you created. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the "Did you know?" talk page. |
--GeeJo (t)⁄(c) • 12:36, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] About the Deptartment of State section
Hmmm...it looks good, but I need a checks and balances sentence somewhere. Checks and balances is vital within the United States of America, even if popular media corporations like AOL Time Warner and News Corporation communicate otherwise. Actually, U.S. Department of State tasks almost always concern checks and balances, to ensure proper communication and safety in domestic, national, and international politics between the United States of America and other entities that co-interact. Once you put the checks and balances within the Department of State, then I will be content. Well, terms and conditions aside, thanks for making a resolution. -PBui44 02:34 20 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Karen Kornbluh
My main issue us that the person does not seem to be overly notable to me as per WP:NOTE. I am not sure if just working in politics for some other famous people is a justification for the article. The references cited are mostly press releases, articles by Ms Kornbluh, or a brief mentioning in other articles. There is not really one major piece that is primarily about her. Do you have any books or newspaper articles that are written primarily about her? I still would like the tag to stay and someone else to look at it. -- Chris 73 | Talk 07:56, 16 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Kellenberg Memorial High School
Ok, so the reorg looks good so far. I have some more specific advice:
- Enclose your references in <ref></ref> tags and think about using the {{cite}} template
- Single sentence paragraphs should be combined
- Overall flow could still use some work
- Still needs improvement on WP:NPOV and WP:NOR, for example the sentence "Because of Kellenberg's extensive extracurricular offerings, students call it 'the school that never sleeps.'" would be considerred original research.
- Pictures of the school, Grounds, and Students
- More information on curriculum and student activities
- Particularly notable alumni (if there are any)
Hope this helps, the article looks a hundred percent better than it looked before. Adam McCormick 05:11, 27 March 2007 (UTC)
