Talk:Herman Wallace (political prisoner)

Areas for improvement: A neutral point of view encyclopedia entry will address the following topics/problems:

Replace contentions with facts Right now it has a very "you gotta believe me!" tone.
Globalize Give readers all over the world some points of referenceWhere is Angola? Is that the African country or the Louisiana town?
Explain the Political Part Sources suggest Herman Wallace may have been wrongly convicted, how does that make him a political prisoner?
Explain (political prisoner) in the title It seems unnecessary and prejudicial to the contents of the article (how about just (inmate)?)
Show the other point of view A neutral article would describe what the state's position was and is.
Biography of Herman Wallace What are his birthdate and birthplace? Why he was in prison? A balanced picture would tell us the good and the bad, and the plain old biographical particulars
Citations how do the "references" back up specific facts in the text?

KevinCuddeback (talk) 03:04, 21 May 2008 (UTC)