Talk:Herb Edelman
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[edit] This needs help
Not bad for information, but right now this is two, possibly three, short bios playing one after another. They need to be sifted into one, and the POV ("accepted his destiny", "'Only in New York...'") taken out. Zephyrad 13:28, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
