Talk:Henry James O'Farrell

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[edit] Article needs cleanup.

The text of this article is extremely poor, with grotesquely ungrammatical sentences and outright incoherent passages.

"O'Farrell was an alcoholic listed as a law clerk having briefly been employed by his brother a Melbourne solicitor with Messrs O'Farrell & Son who regularly advertised in The Star newspaper of Ballarat from premises on Doveton Street, Ballarat."

Who had premises on Doveton Street? If the brother O'Farrell was a Melbourne solicitor, then who advertised in the Ballarat Star? And why is this even mentioned?

--Rich Rostrom 05:16, 30 March 2007 (UTC)

• Well, don't hesitate to clean it up then. Soczyczi 16:05, 16 August 2007 (UTC)