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[edit] Biography assessment rating comment

The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. -- Edofedinburgh 14:53, 21 March 2007 (UTC)


[edit] WHY NO EXPLANATION OF HER DOCUMENT TAMPERING SCANDAL?

this is something that should be mentioned

[edit] POV?

Sorry if you felt that was POV. Stern IS a talk radio giant, that doesn't mean I support him or hate Heather Wilson, or that I support Wilson and hate Howard Stean. --JamesB3 15:34, 25 Dec 2004 (UTC)

JamesB3, I responded to your comment on your Talk page. Again, please don't take POV to be a personal insult or the be an indication that I think you added POV material (an opinion) on purpose. I was just trying to bring the article into a more encyclopedic style of writing. If you have specific concerns or points you'd like to make, I'd look forward to hearing them. Again, thank you for adding the more recent material! --ABQCat 04:58, 26 Dec 2004 (UTC)

Ip 66.166.243.37 - It is against the rules to make unsigned changes to a page. Blatently partisan attacks will be removed Bachs 00:45, 13 February 2006 (UTC)


Please make this article less biased; it is difficult to compare both parties when one biography is basically an attack on the individual. Thanx

[edit] DeLay

None of the allegations against DeLay have been proven. Ronnie Earle, the Tom Delay prosecutor, has a history of indictments against Democrat and Republican political enemies that have failed (see Kay Bailey Hutchison) and it has been widely reported that Earle had to shop the charges to several grand juries because some refused to indict. [1] One of the charges filed by Earle was summarily dismissed by trial judge Pat Priest. Earle has partnered up with producers making a movie, called The Big Buy, about his pursuit of DeLay that has been filming since before DeLay was notified of the charges. [2] [3] [4]

This was added because the added statement about Tom Delay is an unproven allegation that is used to make the member of congress guilty by association. Especially when there is much evidence that Ronnie Earle's indictments are politically motivated. You cannot include one side of an unproven allegation and not include the other, to do so would be unfair and biased. The best course of action is to leave any reference to DeLay on Tom Delay's page and not Heather's until this matter is resolved in a court of law.

Changed Delay Paragrapgh again in accoprdance with compromise with editor Roma

Now Reads

Wilson was the fourth largest recipient of former House Majority Leader DeLay's ARMPAC campaign contributions. DeLay is being prosecuted on charges of felony money laundering of campaign finances and conspiracy to launder money. To date, Wilson has returned less than a quarter of the $46,959 she received from ARMPAC.[5] [6] Republicans say that the charges against DeLay are politically motivated because prosecutor Ronnie Earle has a history of unsuccessful indictments against political enemies of both parties such as Kay Bailey Hutchison (R-TX), and because it has been widely reported that Earle had to shop the charges to multiple grand juries because one refused to indict. [7] [8]Bachs 07:04, 13 February 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Public health edit

I believe that this edit is overtly POV.

[edit] Voting against state's rights & public health

Wilson is supporting an amendment to the Toxic Substance Control Act sponsored by Representative Paul Gillmor (R-OH) that would set the stage for removing states' rights over public health protections from toxic chemicals, and would place the politically-appointed head of the EPA in authority over international treaty law. The EPA head is currently under attack for possible collusion with the pesticide industry for approval of pesticides without adequate scientific safety study. Wilson's votes would override her own state's existing legislation regarding protecting the public from toxic chemicals.

Main reasons:

  • This isn't an enormously publicized piece of legislation. It seems that the only reason it's here is because the editor has a bone to pick with the bill and with Heather Wilson. Personally, I don't really think this should be here if all of her other votes aren't here as well.
  • It doesn't actually SAY what the bill does in specifics, it just makes sweeping statements like "set the stage for removing states' rights.

-Vontafeijos 02:15, 31 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] New Poll

Someone include the new poll that shows them tied.

[edit] NSA Warrantless Domestic Surveillance deletion

I deleted this paragraph:

Wilson's appeal for more oversight came nearly two months after existence of the terrorist spying program first became publicly known. Some believe that her late outcry became politically necessary due to the increased heat coming from Wilson's first formidable election opponent, Attorney General Patricia Madrid.[citation needed] In the days before Wilson spoke up, Madrid's campaign released both a fund-raising report showing Madrid had out-raised Wilson in the previous financial quarter and a poll putting the two candidates in a statistical tie.[1][2]

for the following reasons:

  • The sources (including the previous New York Times article used for this section, does not state that the appeal came "nearly two months" after the existence of the program.
  • "Some believe" is not supported by the sources and is an examples of (disallowed) WP:weasel words.
  • The sources indicate the amount that Madrid raised but not the amount Wilson raised. Any comparison of reports would have to conclusively indicate like-time periods. And a third party analysis would be preferred regardless as wikipedia prefers not to use primary sources:

    Articles need sources or references that appear in reliable, third-party publications. Alone, primary sources and sources affiliated with the subject of this article are insufficient for an accurate encyclopedia article.

  • The sources do support the statement that Madrid and Wilson were in a tie. But to draw conclusions from this is a violation of WP:Original Research.

Find a reliable, verifiable source to support this paragraph, rewrite it using NPOV style (e.g., so-and-so said .....). Thanks. ∴ Therefore | talk 20:24, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

I agree. This paragraph has been tagged for citation since March. Thank you for spelling out your reasons so clearly. -Pete 21:40, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Voting patterns rewrite

This quotation fragment:

Wilson was reportedly "forced to change committees because she offended… Rep. Joe Barton, a Texas Republican, by siding with Democrats…. 'He told me I was too independent,' said Wilson." - Albuquerque Tribune, 1/27/05

is from the Democratic Congressional Campaign Committee: [42]. I suggest a rewrite using the online Albuquerque Journal instead. If someone would like to type in more of the Tribune article (i.e., sans ellipsis) that would help. How about this:

According to the Albuquerque Journal in 2004, Wilson exhibited "political independence" by voting to require the Bush administration to release the cost figures for his prescription drug plan, lecturing the Republican Defense Secretary, Donald Rumsfield, about the importance of the Geneva Conventions during a hearing about the Abu Ghraib scandal and by opposing a move by House Republicans to protect Tom Delay from his fundraising scandal. Although critics said these were calculated moves to moderate her image for her upcoming election, she lost her seat on the House Armed Services Committee due to the actions of Republican Joe Barton, an ally of Delay.[43][44][45]

Thoughts? ∴ Therefore | talk 02:18, 6 October 2007 (UTC)

I rewrote the part about the CQ stats and referenced it. The balance of this paragraph:

during her 2004 re-election campaign, Wilson ran an ad in which an individual said, "Heather Wilson is the most independent politician I have ever known…she is non-partisan." Additionally, she ran an ad in with John McCain who said, "Heather is also an independent thinker, and like me has been known to buck her own party…"

is also lifted verbatim from the above DCCC site. IMO, this should be removed as a Wikipedia:Copyright violations or rewritten with a better source than "2004 Wilson ad". I would rewrite it as:

Wilson often describes herself as an "independent".[46]

and leave it at that. Thoughts? ∴ Therefore | talk 02:30, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
Unfortunately I don't have access to Alb. Jrnl. archives, they're paid subscription only. But it seems problematic to say that "according to the Albuquerque Journal" she exhibited independence -- if the quote above is the basis for that, it's only "according to Wilson." The Journal merely reported her making the claim. -Pete 22:23, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
No, the Alb. Jrnl. is free. Go for the "Trial Premium Pass", sit though a short (but irritating) video and you are in.
I got the "according to the AJ" from the headline:

1st District congresswoman willing to pay the price for her political independence

but I'm open to a change. How about this for the new paragraph:

According to the Congressional Quarterly, from 2001 to 2004, Wilson voted in agreement with the Republican Party at least 90 percent of the time.[3] On the other hand, Wilson often describes herself as an "independent".[47] The Albuquerque Journal in 2004, reported on several instances where Wilson acted in contrast opposition to Republican interests by voting to require the Bush administration to release the cost figures for his prescription drug plan, lecturing the Republican Defense Secretary, Donald Rumsfield, about the importance of the Geneva Conventions during a hearing about the Abu Ghraib scandal and by opposing a move by House Republicans to protect Tom Delay from his fundraising scandal. Although critics said these were calculated moves to moderate her image for her upcoming election, she lost her seat on the House Armed Services Committee due to the actions of Republican Joe Barton, an ally of Delay.[48][49][50]

Better? ∴ Therefore | talk 22:34, 6 October 2007 (UTC)

Yes, that's good, seems to capture all sides pretty well. I'd rewrite the last sentence without the "Although," which seems out of place. Maybe just two separate sentences, without any implied link? -Pete 22:41, 6 October 2007 (UTC)

I rewrote it using your suggestion. Personally I think it makes these two sentences a bit awkward. I think it can be argued that, in fact, the sources were linking the two events. I believe this supports this:

To critics, Wilson's high-profile displays of political independence seemed like a calculated attempt to soften her image in Albuquerque's moderate 1st Congressional District. It's a charge Wilson vigorously disputes. But no matter what her motivation, Wilson's recent breaks with GOP leadership on sensitive issues appear to have come at a cost. Last week, she lost her seat on the House Armed Services Committee.

However, I don't hold a strong opinion on this matter and am happy with it as is. Thanks! I hope you're enjoying this weather as much as I. ∴ Therefore | talk 23:43, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
FWIW, I added "Later," as in "Later, she lost her seat...." That piece of connective tissue makes the paragraph more cohesive. ∴ Therefore | talk 01:05, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Removal of Youtube link

To User:NNtw22 -- why did you remove the youtube external link for her testimony concerning the Viacom hearing? per WP:EL:

YouTube, Google Video, and similar sites: There is no blanket ban on linking to these sites as long as the links abide by the guidelines on this page (which would be infrequent). See also Wikipedia:Copyrights for the prohibition on linking to pages that violate intellectual property rights.

Therefore, on what basis are you removing this link? Public hearings are public property. ∴ Therefore | talk 03:26, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

Should we post a link to every video she appears in or just the ones you chose? There are hundreds of videos with her, likethis one. What are your reasons for including the video? I don't see any politicians featured articles with youtube links. George W. Bush doesn't have any neither does Ted Stevens. NNtw22 04:40, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
You make a good point -- including hundreds of videos would be pointless (and against WP:EL standards). One clarification: I didn't include the video. Secondly, the standards for WP are not what is done on other pages. We could trade politician articles that include videos (e.g., George Allen (U.S. politician) has an EL with a video as does Carolyn McCarthy) and you can counter with articles that don't. In this case, the video relates directly to the section titled "Super Bowl halftime show controversy". Referring again to WP:EL:

There are several things that should be considered when adding an external link.: ... Is it proper in the context of the article (useful, tasteful, informative, factual, etc.)?

In this case, arguably, this link provides backup for said section. Thoughts? ∴ Therefore | talk 04:54, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
The Ted Stevens article, in fact, has an EL that links to an audio recording. Are you objecting that the Wilson EL includes video along with audio? ∴ Therefore | talk 05:13, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
The John F. Kennedy article has several multi-media ELs. ∴ Therefore | talk 05:15, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
This youtube clip adds nothing to the article. Wilson appears in Congress nearly every weekday so there are plently of videos with her. I don't see why you want to include it. Leaving it there only encourages people to add more youtube clips that are anything of substance.
Yes, the Kennedy article does have video, but don't you see a difference between a killed PRESIDENT's inauguration and a Congresswoman's questioning at a house comittee meeting? C56C 16:45, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
Adds nothing? The clip validates the quotation that is in the section "Super Bowl halftime show controversy" -- the video citation for the quotation. Just as in Ted Stevens, the audio clip is the citation for the section of the article that refers to his analogy of the internet as a series of tubes. Just as in the Carolyn McCarthy article, the video serves as the citation for the section of the article that highlights her mistaken definition of a "barrel shroud".
You are correct that it isn't valid to compare a president's article (slain or otherwise) to a congressperson's. I used the JFK article to counter the argument that the Bush article lacks multimedia external links. NNtw22 drew the conclusion that politicians' articles don't include multimedia links using the Bush article and (incorrectly) the Stevens article to buttress his argument. I picked JFK as an analogous (i.e., presidential) counter-example.
If this was a random video link unrelated to the text of the article, I would agree with you. Since it is "proof" of the entire quotation used in the article, it adds value. ∴ Therefore | talk 17:07, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
If you are using it as a citation it belongs as a </ref/> not a WP:EL. C56C 18:11, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
If I may go one step further: the article characterizes her comments, from third parties, as "grandstanding" and a "tempest in a teacup". Some sources for the event describe her voice as "cracking", some mockingly. Therefore, the video not only validates the actual quotation, but allows the reader to judge for themselves if these characterizations are accurate. ∴ Therefore | talk 18:04, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
That opens the floor to people posting all types of videos for all types of people. If you leave this video in, its going to make for an interesting campaign, as videos get posted by different parties. C56C 18:11, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
That is possible. I haven't seen that happen in either the Ted Stevens or the Carolyn McCarthy articles. If someone adds a video that is unrelated to a sourced section of the article, then I believe it should be removed. If someone adds a video and that is the only source of a section of the article, then I believe, again, that should be removed. Using only a primary source is not preferred Wikipedia policy. A third party source should be the arbiter whether a comment is notable. In this case, the section is sourced by a CNN article and there are many other reliable sources that made this notable. Therefore, the addition of the video serves to support the section, not an invitation for a flood of videos. ∴ Therefore | talk 18:23, 7 October 2007 (UTC)