Talk:Headshaking

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I removed the space from "head shake" in the phrase "...causes them to head shake," in order to be consistent with the article "Headshaking." I wonder if "headshake" is properly used as a verb. Someone with more knowledge of the subject will have to resolve this. Otherwise, consider the gramatical "causes their heads to shake," or "causes them to shake their heads."

I also wonder whether the Equilibrium Net Relief Muzzle Net is the only approved product. If their are other approved products, it would be a good idea to mention at least one competing product, or to use a more general term, to avoid the suggestion that Wikipedia is giving a product endorsement.