Talk:Hazelwood Park, South Australia

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[edit] Census Figures

Including Tusmore like that, whilst accurate, definetely detracts from the text and makes the article harder to read - for most of my other articles I just put '[suburb name] census area', and with the link in the footnotes giving the complete census area:

eg. Community Profile: Hazelwood Park/Tusmore courtesy ABS and the City of Burnside

It just makes it easier to understand. I won't press it, but if you're intending to go for FA (which I aim for) I'd suggest it being done so. michael ^talk 09:04, 11 February 2006 (UTC)

I still don't like it but I've changed it for readability. It's just a bit off to claim the suburb has 3000 people when really its population is only half that (approx) ...maelgwntalk 09:43, 11 February 2006 (UTC)