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[edit] Grammar and Clarity

This article could stand some serious gramatical cleanup. The content seems good, however there are a lot of runon and unnecessarily complex sentences. A partial rewrite (or at least some serious surgery) could make this article a lot easier to read. /Blaxthos 08:03, 28 June 2006 (UTC)