Talk:Harold McMaster

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[edit] Neutral point of view needed

A lot of this article seems to be a little more enthusiastic than the desired neutral point of view would require. I did a little editing, trying to make it a little more neutral, and to link the various claims to references.

I deleted this sentence: "McMaster, who thought big, referred to that unit as a "toy" even though its capacity is equivalent to about one-sixth of the global production," because I don't see a reference for it, and since the capacity of the machine wasn't quoted, it's pretty much meaningless. Geoffrey.landis 02:27, 24 September 2007 (UTC)

I don't think he ever graduated from Ohio State, they stepped in and gave him an 'honorary' degree after he did all his work. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 222.151.212.241 (talk) 10:35, 25 March 2008 (UTC)