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[edit] Southampton

Several Southampton Football Club players worked for Harland and Wolff in the city; e.g. George Reader and Jim McAlpine, although the article doesn't appear to mention that the company operated from anywhere other than Belfast. Can anyone shed any light on this? --Daemonic Kangaroo (talk) 13:28, 26 November 2007 (UTC)

Where these part of the Soton Co. Union Men aka Scum that led to the hatred between Portsmouth and their neighbours ? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.243.45.71 (talk) 12:16, 11 April 2008 (UTC)

The article mention the yard's Glasgow facility, but not Southampton or Liverpool. This gives some information. Stu ^{’Bout ye!} 14:25, 26 November 2007 (UTC)

No mention of the secterian aspect of their employees ? Very few if any Catholics were given jobs at the place. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.243.45.71 (talk) 12:14, 11 April 2008 (UTC)