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Enjoyed reading the article. A few points:
- It is quite 'listy', in that the WW2 section comprises a series of events, none of which is more than two or three sentences long. This could be overcome by expanding a few of the more important, (would increase the readability of the text).
- Following from this, many of the paragraphs are short and choppy, and could be merged.
- The lead should be expanded, maybe give a brief summary of his rise through the Luftwaffe, and a sentence on his life post war.
- The article would benifit from a copy edit.
- As a seperate project, consider turning the red links blue ;) + Ceoil 21:19, 21 December 2006 (UTC) (edit)
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I needed a while to sort everything out here. Thanks for your patience and help
[edit] Lack of references
I re-added the {{unsourced}} tag because none of the four References is a reliable source. Three books by the subject and a Flight Simulator fan page are not reliable sources. User:Zoe|(talk) 03:55, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
You might be right Zoe, but please concider that the Page you mentioned includes Informations about the unit, JV 44. We are using quotes and details with agreement of the book author Robert Forsyth and Hans Ekkehard Bob himself. Also in use my own rsearch details that I have collected for more then 7 years. I do not plan to publish a book, nor do I have tendences to earn money with my research. I just want to share well researched details with the community. In my opinion enough sources.........
- Please read WP:V and WP:RS. Your personal research is [[WP:|original research]] and is not permitted in Wikipedia articles. Neither are books published by the subject of the article. I'm readding the tag. User:Zoe|(talk) 22:36, 12 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] WikiProject class rating
This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as start, and the rating on other projects was brought up to start class. BetacommandBot 04:02, 9 November 2007 (UTC)