Talk:Gwelup, Western Australia

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Gwelup, Western Australia was a good article nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There are suggestions below for improving the article. Once these are addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.

Reviewed version: April 29, 2007

[edit] Self review

Highly irregular, I know, but as I'm not the nominator, I'll list a few areas which need work, and will leave them here as a checklist which I shall attend to in short order (probably before the weekend)

  • Lead needs reworking per WP:LEAD
  • Swan Land District notes (p.87 Cooper & McDonald; maps)
  • Any other Cooper & McDonald stuff worth incorporating
  • Demographics section
  • Rewrite first sentence of Politics

Orderinchaos 05:45, 17 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GA review

The article is well written and referenced, but it mainly needs a longer lead.

Also, the article states that the population is 2,324, whereas the document linked from the reference states that its 2,398.

Are any notable local facilities or industries missing from the article, such as theatres, factories, sports clubs?

A mention of the climate would be useful in the geography section.

The article will pass GA once these are fixed. Epbr123 20:37, 22 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GA fail

The 'On Hold' time-limit has now passed. Epbr123 22:09, 29 April 2007 (UTC)