Talk:Guilly d'Herbemont

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I reworded this. The data seems to come from the web page listed under external links (I do not consider this authoritative). Oddly I can't find an article on this in the French wikipedia, but I don't speak French so I could easily have missed it (or there may be a difference in spelling).

The original version stated:

In 1930, a letter d'Herbemont wrote to the director of the one big national dailies of the time, the Écho de Paris was published, alarming the prefect of the police force and the director of the municipal police force.

On February 7, 1931, d'Herbemont gave in the Cercle Intérallié, Guilly d' Herbemont gives, symbolically, in the presence of several ministers, the first two white canes with the President of the blind men of war and a blind man civil, these two canes opening walk with the 5.000 white canes which it finances of its own sums of money.

I tried to retain the information while fixing the grammar into native English. RJFJR 17:19, 26 July 2006 (UTC)

Should this be expanded? RJFJR (talk) 18:24, 28 March 2008 (UTC)