Talk:Griffis Sculpture Park

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[edit] Not an ad

I recently did a paper on this sculpture park and realized it had no entry in wikipedia so I decided to create one. I'm not promoting anything nor is this advertising for any company or event. —Preceding unsigned comment added by PeteBFLO (talk • contribs)

Then put a "hangon" tag on the article, quickly. The tone of the article needs to be changed to one less like an advertising pamphlet. You need sources; you need to remove peacock words; you need to remove things like admission charges and the like. Also: you need to format the article with internal links to other Wikipedia articles to people, places, concepts, etc. Hope this helps! --Orange Mike | Talk 16:56, 4 December 2007 (UTC)