Talk:Green Line route 724

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[edit] Standard of this article

I have recently come across this article, and to be honest it is not too good! There is no notability mentioned, the bottom is riddled with Point of view and is in the wrong language tone for Wikipedia. The rest of the article is made up of a messy list of places the route services. Compared to some of the articles on London Bus routes, this one is awful, and I'm surprised it wasn't speedily deleted when it was created. I'm not the type for deleting everything that people have created in good faith, but I do believe that unless this article is significantly improved, someone else will nominate it for deletion -- Thanks, Arriva436^shout! 13:10, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

I have decided I am going to improve the article. -- Thanks, Arriva436^shout! 14:16, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Improvement of article

Further to the above, I have now finished my improvements to this article. To start with, I moved the pages from "Greenline route 724" to "Green Line route 724", as the article Green Line Coaches uses two separate words. I have also created this infobox, which summaries the information and is in the same style as the ones used on London Bus routes. It could be used on any other Green Line route articles if they were created. Also like the London Bus routes, I have standardised the current route section with two separate columns. There is now a new see also and external links section, and I have done some references.

What could be added is more history I could only really fin info from the DAF/Plaxtons that entered service from 1998. A picture would also look nice in the infobox! -- Thanks, Arriva436^shout! 16:42, 21 March 2008 (UTC)