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I have edited this to contain more useful information, be less focused on criticism/ less POV and cite its sources. I wanted to include more criticism but I had difficulty finding critical reviews. I have taken out the following until such time as it can be attributed to specific notable critics as per WP:NOR. I think the criticism section ought to include more than one perspective, though I suspect that most criticism will be from a Libertarian perspective. Others are better placed to find such material than I, but I'm happy to finish the job if others point me in the direction of the sources. Mattley (Chattley) 21:27, 15 December 2005 (UTC)

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Critics argue that Stiglitz creates straw man in his portrayal of his free market opponents labeling them “fundamentalists” and “ideologues” He also portrays the Free Market in an unrealistic light giving it an image of impossibility claiming that the Free Market requires “perfect information and perfect competition” two terms he does not appropriately define for the casual reader (For which this book is written). Having done so he misleads the reader into an inappropriate understanding of those terms, but furthermore, tells his readers that free market advocates believe perfect information and perfect competition to exist at all times.
Stiglitz also argues that rapid privatization and liberalization are bad and destructive policies by offering a highly sophomoric account of global events. His best example is the failed Russian attempt in the 1990s. Like the deceptive macroeconomic policies he supports, Stiglitz prefers to leave the information incomplete leaving the reader with only enough information to believe his point that privatization doesn’t really work and that Russia should have copied China’s slow and managed transition. What Stiglitz does not tell his reader is that Russia did try China’s slow and managed transition to capital markets a decade before, but it failed miserably.
A reading an opposintion viewpoint of history and economics, such as Brink Lindsey’s “Against the Dead Hand” will provide a more detailed account of Russia’s attempts at privatization and why it really failed; as Lindsey provides much of the information purposefully left out by Stiglitz to “prove” his point.

no the criticism did not come from a libertarian perspective it came from a factual perspective.

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[edit] ? and Its Discontents

Is the title a reference to Sigmund Freud's Civilization and Its Discontents? Mattley (Chattley) 01:23, 16 December 2005 (UTC)

[edit] For such a short article..

..is such a large amount of criticism required? Slizor 00:37, 14 February 2006 (UTC)

yes, the book was that big of a piece of *%$% (Gibby 03:50, 14 February 2006 (UTC))

Wrong answer. Your personal feelings about the book have no bearing on the matter. Wikipedia should reflect a) what notable critics had to say and b) how the book was recieved by the public at large. The fact is that this book had a very positive reception, getting glowing reviews all over the place. The critics were few and far between. They were certainly more subtle than you suggest. All the criticism I have found comes from free market advocates and, while this does not make their criticism invalid, it hardly makes it notable or of interest to the reader. Advocates of the free market criticise people who don't advocate the free market. Amazing! Perhaps you want to add some material on forest-centred excretory behaviour to the article on bear? Really, you should have a look at how other articles handle balance and the incorporation of diverging views. You will note that Catholic Church does not have paragraphs and paragraphs detailing Ian Paisley's view of the papacy. There are thousands of articles on religion-related subjects that do not even mention the very widely held POV that THERE IS NO GOD! They do not need to, because anyone interested can go and read Atheism or some such. Similarly, anyone really interested can go and read about Libertarianism or Milton Friedman or the Free Market to their heart's content. NPOV does not mean that every article has to have at least a paragraph of your POV justified with some vague reference to Milton Friedman. Mattley (Chattley) 14:26, 14 February 2006 (UTC)

And guess what, I have cited material from notable critics suggesting the same....and half of what I wrote on their vies is not present. If you want to fight on the size of the criticism page, I will increase it because I have more citable material available. I have even more criticism from the same people on various sections of the book that comepletly missed points, conflated issues, made up information, distorted other information, ignored certain facts.

If you want to bullshit anymore, I will put more information up that demonstrates how much of a piece of shit that book really is...and it will be from the mouth of notable critics not mine.

Deal with it. (Gibby 17:24, 15 February 2006 (UTC))

Get your tanks off my lawn, Gibby. I'm not going to remove any of the criticism and never said I was. But this article is a very good example of where your goals as an editor conflict with those of this project. Demonstrating "what a piece of shit" this book is isn't what a wikipedia article should be doing. We should be accurately and fairly reflecting how it was recieved and reviewed. It is not about fighting. It is not about tracking down sources that support your POV to use as ammunition. It is about assembling points that reflect opinions about this book in a neutral, balanced and proportional fashion. You need to deal with that. Mattley (Chattley) 18:44, 15 February 2006 (UTC)

All you have to do to realize this is read the criticism on the book. Then you'll understand. I'm only defending the criticism, which is cited, and notable. You and sleezy are attempting to eliminate some criticism on what you arbitrarily determine to be too much criticism...nice try, but it won't fly.

You're going to have to deal with criticism of things you don't like. (Gibby 09:27, 16 February 2006 (UTC))

You can't only cite ideological libertarians as criticism, at least not without explaining that they have an agenda while reviewing. Can you find a criticism that isn't so ideologically tinged?

Why reduce the amount of criticsm when we can just make it balanced instead? If, as Mattley says (and I tend to agree), the book was largely well-received, it ought to be possible to juxtapose some positive reviews with the negative ones that are already present. Perhaps I will attempt to do that in the next few weeks. Would that be agreeable? Jbelleisle 01:20, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Different book with a same/close name

Globalization and Its Discontents: Essays on the New Mobility of People and Money by Saskia Sassen ISBN 1565845188 Publisher: New Press (June 1, 1999) [1]

I also found that confusing. Could someone make a disambiguation page, maybe? I think that would be a good idea.

[edit] Poverty increasing or decreasing?

In his book Stiglitz claims that globalization has not brought the promised economic benefits to some of the poorest nations in the world. This can be easily evidenced by the fact that during the last decade of the twentieth century the number of people living in poverty increased by almost 100 million.

This comes down to the question whether poverty is increasing or decreasing. Taking absolute numbers of the poor does not make sense in this regard. A random example: Say there are 100 poor. A generation later, 60 of them have managed to pull out of poverty, but the 40 remaining had 5 children each who also live in poverty. Thus, while we had 100 poor in the first generation, in the second we have 200 even though poverty was reduced by 60%. To measure whether poverty is being reduced, one should use its relative size, not the absolute number of people living in it.

I suggest removing the sentence "This can easily be evidenced (...)". Treos 08:47, 18 June 2007 (UTC) 84.13.160.118 17:18, 7 August 2007 (UTC)


i think youre trying to suggest what is significant is the percentage of people living in poverty- in the 90's the world population increased by 800 million (see wikipedia page on world population), so as poverty accounts for more than 1/8 of the world population, did it proportionally decrease? 84.13.160.118 17:18, 7 August 2007 (UTC)

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[edit] NPOV section

The section "summarizing" the contents of the book is a completely POV essay. It needs to be redone by someone familiar with the book and its contents. Passages like "Stiglitz should know" and "Little wonder that thousands of activists -- who agree on little else -- brave barricades, tear gas, and slanted media coverage..." are straight out of a sympathetic book review and are totally inappropriate for an encyclopedia article. Elrith (talk) 12:56, 16 May 2008 (UTC)